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Hello, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower โ™ฅ๏ธValentine'sโ™ฅ๏ธ Review today.


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Title:


Your title "My Love My All" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moves freely from one stanza to the next.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a man so full of love that he can't think of nothing else, but the love that is inside himself. What a beautiful way to tell someone just how much you love them. Beautiful piece!


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

I pledge to you my everything today
I love you with all of my heart and soul
From my side may you not step dear away
If you did I may lose all my control.

There is so much emotion in these words. A very powerful love, lucky person she is.


I want to thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us. I enjoyed reading it tonight. Happy โ™ฅ๏ธ Valentine's day Chris.

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Title:


Your title "A Box Full of Kisses" really caught my attention.



Storyline, plot and characters:


I love the storyline, anything with children is precious. Your characters are beautiful, a love between father and daughter is a very unique bond.

Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a little blonde blue eyed little girl wrapping this big box. With anticipation that her father opens her gift. The love that went into it so amazing. I just hated to hear that she died. But, what he did with it, was what any parent would do. You hit spot on with this loving tribute to her. What an amazing story.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:


In a very real sense, each one of us, as humans beings, have been given a gold container filled with unconditional love and kisses... from our children, family members, friends, and God. There is simply no other possession, anyone could hold, more precious than this.

I couldn't have said it any better. Beautifully said.

I want to thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us. I really enjoyed reading it tonight and to start the SuperPower Review February โ™ฅ๏ธ Raid off with yours. Happy ๐Ÿฅ‚ Anniversary Sinbad!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title:


Your title "I had a dream" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


The flow of your piece moved with ease.

Imagery & Emotions:


I can picture laying under the stars, holding hands , listening to you breath next to me. What a beautiful night it is. The warmth of your hand, a reflection of your heart. What a beautiful picture you have given me. Excellent writing and showing others the love you have inside.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:



For that, I gave you the world.

What a beautiful statement to give someone special to you.

I want to thank you for sharing a part of you with us. I really enjoyed reading it today. Happy ๐Ÿฅ‚ Anniversary Anthony.

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Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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Title:


Your title "Ecclesia" really caught my attention and was prompt to look up the meaning. Which my dictionary meaning defines it as a political assembly of citizens in the definition of ancient Greece, or the church members (the collective congregation is an example of an ecclesia). Is your meaning different?


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece moves smoothly making it a pleasure to read.


Imagery & Emotions:


I like how you explained as one tends to part from God and eventually returns to Him finding wisdom in doing so. There are several parts that I found captivating and they stood out and captured my train of thought which kept me reading more. This piece is wonderfully written and will capture your readers from beginning to end.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

A revealing light is His glory, and uncertainty will end
As the Man sees the light, his conceit falls apart
And his knees bends low, his tongue shall declare
His praise endureth for ever.

It is amazing when the light is revealed to you, making His Glory all the sweeter.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.

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I want to say Congratulations for being our,

"๐Ÿฅˆ 2nd Place WINNER "


May you be blessed always,
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Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Love In A Moment of Wisdom" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move nicely within this piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a father sitting at the kitchen table with his child sitting on the floor wrapped around his knee. While Aunt Sharon is pulling out the freshly baked pie from the oven. They are listening to you read from the Bible. It's sweet how they look at him as he speaks. Your detail is perfectly executed in your piece giving your readers a look into the kitchen. Where most families gather to enjoy each other after a long day. Well written and a joy to read.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

How sweet a refrain becomes a prayer as your
Head rests upon my chin souls listening

I can picture this perfectly, thank you for showing me vs. telling me about your piece. That makes it very memorable.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


"FANTASTIC JOB"


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title:


Your title "Contestant in queen of Comedy Challenge Part 3" really caught my attention.



Imagery & Emotions:


What a way to end my day with a laugh and giggle. Thank you, after the month I have had you made my night. Thank you, I have heard the joke before, but I had forgotten it. Thank you for memory lane today. I throughly enjoyed it. Great job, I will have to tell it to my kids, now.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Till this day you can ride across the mountainous regions and signs will tell you to "watch for Fallen Rocks".


It reminds me of "Laugh In" a comedy show in the late 60's early 70's that me parents watched.


I want to thank you for sharing this and making my night. I really enjoyed reading it and laughing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title:


Your title "Lock Out the Night" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece flows smoothly with rhythm from one stanza to the next. Making this a delightful read.

Imagery & Emotions:


Your piece speaks straight from within your soul. I feel the pain from inside. Sometimes it's so hard to explain the battle within ones soul. You captured it in this piece. Beautiful job in conveying it to us.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Lock out the night from my soul, O Lord,
And let me see only Thy face.


I often speak these very words.


I want to thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it tonight.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title:


Your title "Lord, Please Guide Me" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece flows smoothly with a nice rhythm and flow.

Imagery & Emotions:


I love this it makes a short and meaningful prayer to our God Almighty. Your piece speaks volumes in a tiny frame. Sometimes, He speaks few words to us which make strong impacts on our lives. Well written and a great job.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:


God
We praise You
Please guide and bless us
So we might serve You better
Lord

I choose the whole piece, because without it all, it wouldn't be. Does that make sense to you?

I want to thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it today.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title:


Your title "Finding Love" really caught my attention and had to see how you described finding His love.



Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece flows smoothly along as if you were speaking your words to a friend or another person.

Imagery & Emotions:


Yes, it was the same for me, finding His love was the most rewarding experience that I have ever experienced in my life. The warmth of His love never leaves you. It was a burst of life and renewal for me. Your piece speaks from your soul and radiates your faith and love for Him. Job well done.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

But in my heart happiness thrived,
Peace filled my entire life,
And for the first time I saw true grace.



I want to thank you for sharing your faith and piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it today.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contest here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "The Night the Bears Roamed" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


With each stanza you brought rhythm and flow. Carrying your piece into the next.


Imagery & Emotions:


I imagined as if I was sitting around the campfire also listening to the story. It brought back those nights that I sat around the campfire with my sons and friends as my ex-husband told his stories. And he got them every time. I really enjoyed reading your piece. It is a great piece, I like how you added the chapter and verses to it.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

While my Dad
sat on the front porch
of the vacation cabin,


Ah, fond memories, the stories that one can weave to pass the time. Always good laughs.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. I am giving you a Honorable Mention, it is only because you missed one rule, the line count is 20 on this particular month, you have 31. But, your story is very cute and should be noticed.


" Honorable Mention"


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Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contest here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "The Shepherds Cross" really caught my attention and thought it went well with your piece.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece moved steady within each line. Making the rhythm and flow easy to read with no distractions.


Imagery & Emotions:


Ok, Wow, I love the cross. It is perfect with this piece. But, of course it would have been in a foot print as well. Your piece leaped out at me when I first opened it and caught my eye. Your words give your interpretation of the chapter and verses. Making this a delight to read and enjoy. Great job, I see other reader's enjoying it as well.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Darkness falls
The world fades


It is as if you set up the stage for us to witness a play of sadness, dispair, strength, comfort and the much needed bliss from our Heavenly Father.


I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. It is my great pleasure to award you 1st place in December "2018" Lighthouse Poetry Contest.



"1st Place ๐Ÿฅ‡ Winner"


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Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contest here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Lord Will Fulfill my Needs ~Psalms 23" really caught my attention and spoke of the passage well.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm of your piece flowed effortlessly.


Imagery & Emotions:


You gave me peace and comfort while I read your poem. It is wonderfully put into your own words and tells us your understanding of the verse. It's hard for some people to interpret the understanding of the chapter and verses that they read to others sometimes. You did a great job at interpreting it in your piece.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

The Lord will make my life calm and renew my spirit.

Oh, how the Lord does calm us and renew our spirit. Just by allowing us to come to Him so freely.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. It is my great pleasure to award you 1st place in December "2018" Lighthouse Poetry Contest.


"1st Place ๐Ÿฅ‡ Winner"


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Hello, I'm LegendaryMaskโคaka Girl w/a ๐Ÿ’“ as you well know ...lol. I thought I'd drop by and see what's happening in your corner of this magnificent world we live in.


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Title:


Your title "One Simple Interesting Fact" now as you well know I'd finally find it and it would get my attention.


Fact based research:


I love research articles and you picked up where I left off.

Imagery & Emotions:


Oh, those Moon Pies, such delicious, delectictable delights. The chocolate, banana ones are my favorite. I had know idea about strawberry and lemon, let alone vanilla and orange. Now, I can see me taking a bite of orange then vanilla, I would have a Dreamcycle Moon Pie ...OMGOODNESS. I grew up on them, easy for my momma to supply 5 kids for snacks.

I have found your research to be very thorough and I am very impressed with it. It is well written and informative. I had no idea all the history of a Moon Pie. Great job in telling all the facts.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

One of the miners held out his hands framing the moon above, and said that they wanted it about that big.

Interesting how it became a creation from just a hand movement.

I want to thank you for sharing the facts about Moon Pies with me. I enjoyed reading about them. Now, I'm craving one ...๐Ÿ˜€

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Title:


Your title "The Art of Reviewing Poetry" really caught my attention.


I have chunked most of my format here. After reading this article. You have some major points for me to reconsider, about how not to only write my poetry, but in reviewing it as well. It is something that I take to heart. I have always been one who wants to better the craft I'm doing at the time. When I was retail, I concentrated on it. Now, that I'm retired my writing is my passion. You have made some excellent points and hit on some key notes I would love to learn. If you have the time I would like to know more about poetry.

You have written a very impressive article here and I will share with others who are just learning the art of poetry. I applaud you for a terrific job. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading it and want to wish you a wonderful WdC Anniversary again. May your New Year be prosperous beyond your imagination.

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๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿฅ‚ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ

Here at WdC and may you have many more. What better way to celebrate then to give you a anniversary review.


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December Reviews


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Title:


Your title "Good Clean Fun" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Perfect rhythm and flow in this piece.

Imagery & Emotions:


This is a cute little piece. Now, it makes me want to get my bath salts out and enjoy a soak ...lol
A wonderful written piece with details that makes you want to jump in to relax your day away.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Iโ€™ll always leave you with a smile
and offer you just what you seek:



Yes, some much needed down time.


I want to thank you for sharing this sweet reminder to always give yourself downtime. I really enjoyed reading your rhyme. I wish you a very ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐Ÿฅ‚ Happy WdC Anniversary ๐Ÿฅ‚๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰.

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December Reviews


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Title:


Your title "103 point 5" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece moves with great rhythm and flow. You have it moving at a great pace, along with 103.5 ...*Smile*

Imagery & Emotions:


Oh dear me, I truly believe that we have all done this once or twice. Well, maybe not the gun thing. ๐Ÿค” But, who knows right! I can see every detail as you speak just because it is so relatable. Do I hear a bit of "The Night Before Christmas" here? Or is that 103.5 in my ear?

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Just think how much closer you would be if she was โ€˜removed.โ€™



Don't we all feel this way sometimes? Oh dear me!

I want to thank you for sharing such an insight to your way of thinking. Oh, it ain't like it's never been thought of right? I really enjoyed reading your piece. I hope your having an
๐ŸŒŸ AWESOME ๐ŸŒŸ Anniversary.

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December Reviews


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Title:


Your title "Stained" really caught my attention and I had to see what was inside.



Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm flowed with ease, making this a easy piece to follow. Each stance lead me into the other.

Imagery & Emotions:


This speaks of the tortment that one has inflected upon oneself from the betrayal of ones trust. Leaving their life stained with regret and sorrow for what has happened. The choices one makes suffers consequences of their actions. The knowledge of such acts is a new beginning whether they realize it or not. Sometimes you only see the pain that you have caused at the moment.

Although this piece is sad, it also enlightens the pain that is within ones soul who has caused distrust from another. Beautifully written, Ken.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Through my window pane, motley and splattered,
I envy the rain in its cleansing fall.


Very strong statement.

I want to thank you for sharing this eye opening look into the other side. I really enjoyed reading it and wish you a very Happy Anniversary Ken. I look forward to reading and learning more from you. You inspire me to be better at my gift. Thank you so much.

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Hello Nikola,

I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Review today for our Winter Raid.


Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Winter's Night" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


This piece had perfect flow and rhythm.


Imagery & Emotions:


I could picture sitting at my window in candlelight, starring into the sky. Just the moon, stars and me in my comfy PJs. What a perfect picture you discribed.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Gazing at winter's moon
through frosted glass.


I want to thank you for sharing this sweet little piece packed with imagnation. I enjoyed reading it today. I hope that you have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

Keep Writing on!
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Hello Lady Rock,

I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Review today for our Winter Raid.


Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "Love is When the Wind Whispers" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece has a wonderful rhythm and flow to it. Making it a very easy piece to follow.


Imagery & Emotions:


I could see your father and mother as you discribed them in detail. As you spoke to your son about love. It reminded me of when I told my son's. Wonderfully written, spoke volumes of love.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Love is the taste of blackberry pie
my Grandma baked decades ago.
Love is winters spent with them
and the flavor of flakes of snow.


I want to thank you for sharingthis very sweet poem with us. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a very blessed Christmas and a Happy New Year.

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Hey BG, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Review today, for our Winter Raid.


Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "A lesson on the word Christmas" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The flow of this piece is very easy to keep up with. I found no distractions to keep me from reading your piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


Oh dear me, this reminds my when I came home from school one day, I was in my 2nd grade at the time. My mom was furious, no other way to put it. She sat me down when I began to cry. Our teacher had taught us to do just that abbreviate Christmas. I received my lesson at a very early age. I is very important not to take out Christ in Christmas. I am so grateful to her for explaining it to me.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

It's important to write out the entire word, and avoid making this big mistake in life during this special time of the year.


I want to thank you for sharing this very important meaning behind why it is very important to keep Christ in Christmas. I enjoyed reading it today. Merry Christmas my dear friend and a very Happy New Year to you.


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You're a Winner


It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package from "The 4 Seasons Auction" that you bid for. This is your 3rd and final review. It's been a pleasure reviewing and reading your work. It has taken me a few days to decide just which ones I wanted to review.๐Ÿค” You have a lot of great pieces in your portfolio.

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Title:


Your title " Travel-Uppity" really caught my attention.


Storyline, Plot and Charcaters:


Surprise, surprise. It makes you really wonder just what is going on in Arthur's mind right now. A great storyline and plot to a possible solution to his future. Love the charcaters.

Imagery & Emotions:


You sucked me right in to your story. I actually wanted to slap her senseless at midway. I just can't imagine people staying married to negative people. But, they do. Great story, awesome details. I reacted to every word you said. Your piece was written very well.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

I want to add here that I like how you emphasized on each movie title. That is my favorite pieces to your piece.

I want to thank you for supporting "The 4 Seasons Auction." It amazes me how much we all pull together in this community to help one another.


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You're a Winner


It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package from "The 4 Seasons Auction" that you bid for. This is your 2nd of 3 reviews that are awarded.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.



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Title:


Your title "The Candy, Man" really caught my attention.


Storyline, Plot and Charcaters:


Alrighty, I had too see just who the Candy man was and why you called him that. I love our charcaters, surprise a puppy dog, I absolutely love it.

Imagery & Emotions:


Haven't we all been there, except mine are Hersey's Kisses. A smaller version and don't hurt as much ...lol. You really had me going I thought that he was talking to a friend or a child at first. I like that he turned out to be a mutt. Got read, written awesomely and you captured me from the very start. CHOCOLATE ...lol

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

"Change of plans," I declared. "We're going for a walk, and then I'm having the chocolate."

I love it you can always change in midstream, I think I would've a whole lot sooner.

I want to thank you for supporting " The 4 Seasons Auction." It amazes me how much we all pull together in this community to help one another.


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You're a Winner


It is my pleasure to read and review your winning package from "The 4 Seasons Auction" that you bid for. This is your 1st of 3 reviews that are awarded.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.



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Title:


Your title "Snakes Alive, Son!" really caught my attention.


Storyline, Plot and Charcaters:


Very interesting storyline and plot, I'm a practical joker myself. So your charcater has some good attentions that truly backfire on hm. Never dreamed that you could possibly go to prison for it.

Imagery & Emotions:


Ok, being a joker myself I pictured everything he was doing right down to coiling the snake up. I thought for sure that they were all playing a joke on him. You gave details and showed me his story and Drew me into it. Now, I feel really bad for him. Almost makes me regret some of my practical jokes through the years. I found this well written and a delight to read.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

It took me an amazingly long time to come around to that way of thinking, though, and part of me still thinks it was simply a hilarious practical joke gone wrong.

I want to thank you for supporting "The 4 Seasons Auction." It amazes me how much we all pull together in this community to help one another.


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Hello Naverine2 (Don) welcome to WdC. Our home away from home. It is my great pleasure to read and review your wonderful piece. It is a delightful poem. Your rhythm and flow is perfect and easy to follow. Now, I'm not an expert reviewer of any sort. But, I can say this is a delight to read.

It gives to ones imagination of rainbows, love and fun. Full of love and I can see that it comes from within your soul. May your imagination flow effortlessly to give us more of your insight to make believe and reality through your eyes.

I hope you find WdC a delight and join us often. I can't wait to read more of your work. I've been told that it is very good.

May you be blessed always,
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Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contest here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

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Title:


Your title "Two Adams" really caught my attention, wondering just where you were going to lead me.


Rhythm & Flow:


I love how you gave each sin he had protrade, single lines. It moved perfectly in form for what you wanted to say. A very smooth piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I really liked that you took the first man, whom took pride, honor and humble into his heart. I like that you gave two sides to Adam. This is well written and gives others a sense of what he possibly went through at that time.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Be clothed with humility like Jesus...
Not merely in words-
Nor only in appearance-
But 'really' in our hearts.

To be clothed like Jesus, to be like Jesus, to love, honor an speak like Jesus. What a world we would be then. I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


"It is my honor to present you with ๐Ÿฅ‡ 1st Place Winner "


May you be blessed always,
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