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Rated: E | (4.5)
    
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Hello , I thought I'd drop by and give you a WdC 13th Anniversary SuperPower Review Raid!.

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I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

Title:

Your title "Treasure in the Closet" really caught my attention. What treasure lays ahead of us?

Character, Plot & Flow:

An adventure all it's own when you clean out your closet. A time when one walks down memory lane. Your story moves in a timely manner and well keep your readers interested to the end. Great job in accomplishing it making it a great story.

Imagery & Emotions:

I love it, we are doing the same thing with my grand-daughter she started her second year in college. Of course, Covid-19 shortened last year for everyone. Looking back on all the moves and cleaning out of closets that families make. Which you reminded me that I need to clean mine out again.
Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

I think I’ll wait for Mom to help with this. There, that wasn’t so hard.

Oh, how mom takes care of everything. What would we do without them? My son is 43 and still calls when he needs advice. But, I also call him when I need advice as well. I'm glad the road goes both ways.

Suggested Changes:

Here are the suggested changes: I hope that they are helpful and useful.

1. It was time—the summer when life changes.
2. My clock radio, desk lamp, pencil cup, stapler, along with assorted paper clips, rubber bands, and other desk drawer junk, add comma were stashed in a cardboard box sitting in the middle of the
floor. add a period
3. Today was the day I dreaded remove comma the day that should have come first but postponed to last.
4. Add; It seems I remember some famous person saying, “Every great cleanout begins by opening the door,” or something to that effect.
5. “Yes. No. I mean, add comma it works, but it’s no good unless you have two of them.”


Thank you for sharing this delightful piece. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful rest of the week and thank you for helping us celebrate WdC SuperPower Reviewers 13th Anniversary.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
   
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "Image In A Mirror " really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm and flow move throughout the piece capturing your readers to the end.


Imagery & Emotions:

Speaking in parables, looking in the mirror, seeing that you are a reflection of Jesus. What would Jesus do? All these and other questions pop into mind. When do we stop the chaos and become one society growing in brotherly love towards one another? I love that you reflected on what love should be towards fellow mankind. We have to start somewhere. Washing other's feet is a humbling experience, I am told. Excellent job in showing by pretraining it in a mirror.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

God knows me best in this
Image in the mirror
Born to love like Him
The One whom men
Rejected

God does know us better than we know ourselves. He knows what is in our hearts even if we can't relay it to others in a way they understand. God understands.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you the Winner of June's "Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I do hope that you enjoyed entering and sharing your love with us.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
   
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "Phileo Adelphos" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

I enjoy the way you formed this piece giving it a flare to the flow and rhythm of your piece.

Imagery & Emotions:

I love that you used the greek meaning Phileo Adelphos for Brotherly Love. While using the flip side, different points of view the other side of the coin to say. Sometimes we have to be blunt to get our point across to others or even ourselves sometimes. A reminder a check to make sure that we are showing brotherly love to one another. I love the imagery that you used. A break to help your readers contemplate what you're speaking about it. Excellent job!

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

(we will love the person)

Reminding us that it is the person we are to love and to forgive their transgressions. Forgiveness becomes the greatest love of all in loving the person before you.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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Rated: E | (3.5)
   
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

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Title:

Your title "Brotherly Love" really caught my attention.

Imagery & Emotions:

You speak of how one should be towards their fellow man and the pitfalls of not having or giving brotherly love to one another. It is especially important at times like these during a pandemic. I wonder what it was like during others? The chaos and pandemonium that can destroy a society, is heartbreaking to one. Although this is free verse, your piece is more like a story poem. Great job in showing mankind that there is still hope as long as you don't lose faith.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Brotherly Love becomes a covering of Day
to those, who are living through the dark night of the soul.

I think that if we show brotherly love towards each other that there would be less darkness in this world. Because Love is light.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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Rated: E | (3.5)
    
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST

It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "For the Love of God" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

Your rhythm and flow move throughout your piece with a rhyme making it whimsical. I do have a suggestion to keep from distracting your readers from your pieces, making it flow smoother. Do your footnotes, prompts, and such at the bottom of your page. Gives it a clean, cut finish.

Imagery & Emotions:

I see Jesus walking with us talking and telling us of His love and what His father expects from us to love each other as He loves us, unconditionally. Sharing all things with our sisters and brothers, making sure they have as we have, His love. They say seeing is believing, but what about showing each other. You describe it in your piece, well done.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:
Share with him your bread and your home,
Show him that your love is full-blown.

I love brotherly love, sharing is caring, and giving one food warms the heart to no end. My church tries to have potlucks once a month in different age groups. Making it fun for all. Coming together and sharing is a wonderful thing.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
    
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Hello Jim, I thought I'd drop by and give you a Strawberry Shortcake Super Power Review Raid! and Anniversary Review this weekend. I want to say congratulations to another year here at WdC. May you have many joyful and productive years to come.

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I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.
Title:

Your title "A Potluck Family Dinner" really caught my attention.
Rhythm & Flow:

You captured your reader with the rhythm and flow moving nicely throughout your piece. I loved that you rhymed it gave it a nice touch.

Imagery & Emotions:

As I read it, I pictured your family and yourself gathering at a family member's home. Everyone bringing a favorite dish of theirs. You were right about it being potluck. Chicken with marshmallow, beer tasting wine, and can't forget the blue gravy? I'd say the bread was probably worth the extra, even if you had to marry the baker. Now, to say the least, when I had gotten to the end to see that it was after a funeral I can say that it was a feast of sorts. We all can be out of sorts when a family member or dear friend passes. We do things and forget things that we normally don't on a typical normal day. We are like a robot on autopilot. I know this for a fact with presently losing my great-nephew a few weeks ago.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:
Now we all had quite the feast,
Together our meal had been pieced,
What brought us all together?
In this very foul weather?
Why, a meal to honor the deceased.

The things that bring people together are always for different things, but the common denominator is food. Food for the soul. To gather and swap memories and laughter for the loved one lost. I especially enjoyed the rhyming.

Thank you for sharing this delightful piece about family gatherings. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful Anniversary this month and I hope you have a joyful weekend.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "The Voice: Words and Music" really caught my attention.
Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout the piece. Making it easy to capture your reader's attention.

Imagery & Emotions:

I picture myself listening for God's voice in all things that surround me. Like on a rainy day I love to open my front door and I listen to the rain and the wind lightly going through my small world ringing my chimes, making beautiful music for Him and me to listen to. I sometimes fall asleep being held by His words as we listen to the sounds they make. Your right you never know where you will hear His voice, only if we would stop and listen for it more then we do. Excellent job, thank you for sharing some beautiful ways to listen for it.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

His voice could be the next one
Calling me up out of my
Buttery toast day
My ears ready to bow my knees hearing His heart

I couldn't pick just one line as my favorite, I picked this verse because you are totally right we never know when He will appear and call one home to Him. Not only that now you have me wanting some buttery toast...lol

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It gives me great pleasure to award you 3rd place in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. for April 2020.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
          
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "The Voice of God" really caught my attention.
Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout the piece. Making it easy to capture your reader's attention.

Imagery & Emotions:

Yes, yes indeed it is His voice that sets us all free from everything that is thrown at us. Challenging us to do good or evil. It is left up to us what we choose. If we listen we will hear it ringing loud and clear in our hearts. Amazing job in telling and showing His voice and capturing your readers.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Today, His voice still speaks -

teaching me His Word.

The Holy Spirit still talks with my spirit,

guiding me, assuring me with His love.

I can never choose just one line, I always end up with a whole verse. This one spoke to me. We will never lose His voice, and He will speak to us as long as we don't push Him away. We need to be able to hear His words to guide us from harm and darkness that falls upon this Earth. He gives us peace, comfort, and love when we listen for Him.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It gives me great pleasure to award you 2nd place in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. for April 2020.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
       
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "One Voice, God's" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:

The flow of your pieces moves smoothly throughout making this a delight to read. Captivating your readers in reading on.

Imagery & Emotions:

Your piece speaks of God's voice in our everyday life, in the smallest of things even rain. How He speaks to us in gentle tones and words of unconditional love. Yet His voice is strong and soothing to those who follow Him. I found your piece beautiful in describing His voice to others. Exceptional job, thank you for sharing God's voice with others.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

When the wind rustles in the evening
When the thunder roars in the storm
When a child laughs in its happiness
When the dove coos in the morn
I hear your voice.


It was hard to choose one line, I chose this verse as my favorite. The sound of God's voice surrounds us daily to give us comfort in our busy chaotic world. If only we would stop and listen to it more often then we do.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing, and writing about the Bible. It gives me great pleasure to award you 1st place in "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. for April 2020.


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Rated: E | (5.0)

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It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter in the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often to enter. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "Unwarranted Forgiveness" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow move freely throughout your piece, making it easy to read and keeping your readers involved to the end.


Imagery & Emotions:


You give your readers a powerful message on the sins we create for ourselves and how forgiving our Lord God forgives us and loves us unconditional for all time. You have inspired your readers with your words of encouragement knowing that no matter what we do He is there to give us forgiveness. Excellent job inspiring others through your words.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

My gratitude cannot begin to encompass
the magnificence of your mercy
and I am left, speechless before You.

He does give us mercy when we feel it is unwarranted. I think that when we do wrong we are harder on ourselves for letting Him down, then He is with us. He never leaves us or forsakes us. We do that to ourselves. Thank you so much for the encouraging words that you have given to your readers.

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"1st Place"

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WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

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I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "You're Amazing!" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your poem move freely throughout your piece.


Imagery & Emotions:


I felt so in tune with your words, making them become my own. It felt like your thoughts were my thoughts. That is what every writer aims for in their readers, to touch the inner soul within themselves. You praised God through your whole piece, and I know that He was smiling from ear to ear with the praise you give me. You showed everyone what it was like to be in awe of our Lord Jesus. Fantastic job, I feel like this didn't take you to long to write. If it didn't, it doesn't take long when it is on your heart to write.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

I wonder what your voice must sound like?
Sweet and powerful, but full of kindness and love.

I can imagine it is deep, stern, but so loving, to hear His voice. I think we all wonder and search for the sound of His voice. It sounds like a new title and a piece there. You have inspired me, "The Sound of Your Voice." Amazing is His love. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.

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"1st Place"

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Rated: E | (4.5)

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "All Is Well With My Soul" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move freely throughout your poem. Making it easy to follow and appreciate.


Imagery & Emotions:


I like how you showed the drama of our daily lives and how to concur it with peace. It is difficult these days, it seems to get harder and harder every day. Great job, in executing your poem and keeping your readers inspired by how you handle the day to day things.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

In the quiet space between thoughts
I let my mind ease
I let my heart open
And I breathe
A peace comes over me
And I know
All is well with my soul
And nothing can touch me here.

This is precisely what I do to relieve my stress of daily life. In which I'm doing a lot of lately, to keep my sanity and peace. Thank you for inspiring us in your piece.

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"2nd Place"

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Rated: E | (4.0)

WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it in the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith, and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "My Soul- My Cross" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm moves smoothly through your piece, making to easy for your readers to relate to your words.


Imagery & Emotions:


What an inspiring piece! You showed strength by picking up your cross and moving forward through this world we temporarily live in. May God protect us from the evil that's spreading across the globe. You showed courage in the battle against sin and prevailed, winning the ultimate prize your days in Heaven. All is well with your soul, my friend. You did a fantastic job of expressing it in your words and encouraging others to Christ.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

I'm content watching the world go by,

Joyful with my battle cry.


All is well with my soul.


In my weakness comes His Almighty power,

Guiding me in Satan's darkest hour.


I can't help it. I love these two verses. Joyful with my battle cry. We praise our Father on a daily basis. I'm listening to worship music now to write these reviews. Something I do every month, it helps me concentrate on Him and the words written by His followers. We need His almighty power to protect us in the darkness of today. We sure need it in the days to come.

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"3rd Place"

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and entered it in the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, correction if needed, and some advice, these are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.


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Title:


Your title "Because of Your Amazing Grace" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm moves smoothly throughout your piece making it easy to read and follow. Keeping the attention of your readers.


Imagery & Emotions:


I love how you start your piece out. You are the only one that used both songs and was very delighted in seeing that. You express the love that you have in God and the debt He paid for our sins. You give inspiration for the love and forgiveness He gives to all. Giving yourself to His service and inspiring others to enjoy Him as you do. Excellent job, I wanted to give you more than Honorable Mention, but you missed highlighting the songs you used in your verse in grape, it is one of the rules. I wanted to mention your piece because you are the only one who used both songs.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Because of Your Amazing Grace, It Is Well With My Soul!

I enjoyed that they used both songs, because without His amazing grace, not is all well with our souls. Thank you so much Ruwth for being you and sharing this beautiful poem.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. It is my pleasure to award you "Honorable Mention" for March "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest" Open in new Window.


"Honorable Mention"

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter the contest. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:


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Title:


Your title "All's well with me." really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece moves smoothly throughout capturing your readers with ease.


Imagery & Emotions:


You painted a picture that your readers can relate to. The world with all of its chaos and darkness. You have inspired your readers of a new day and encouragement to carry on no matter what. Excellent job in conveying the ultimate sound of God's gift to us, a bird song. To brighten our day and soothe our souls.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Soon the sky rang with bird song
carried to my window on a windy flute.
And, I knew it is well with my soul.

Oh, the sound of birds singing in the morning light is soothing to the soul. It is amazing the smallest of things that He has created bring us such joy. I love how you describe it as a windy flute. Very creative yourself, look at you ...lol

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



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Rated: E | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.
Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:

Your title "Christmas" really caught my attention:

Imagery & Emotions:

I love the words that you choose to use in your piece. The story of Jesus is a very strong one for me, as I'm sure that it is for all. Your words speak volumes with meanings of their own accord. Awesome job.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Amazing
Savior

My favorite words in the whole wide world are of our Lord and Savior. Need I say anymore?

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. Everyone is a winner for the December 2019 contest. It's my honor to announce that you have won 2nd place a tie.

"2nd PLACE"

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Hello Angus, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Reviewer's Review Winter Raid this weekend.

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Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "Frosty's Revenge?" really caught my attention.


Character, Plot & Flow:


This character sounds familiar but has an evil side. With a little mystery mixed in.


Imagery & Emotions:


I always wondered what became of dear Frosty. Now, I know he became a ruthless killer out for revenge. I can't really blame him much. No errors to really speak of...lol Beautifully written and packs a powerful message in a small package.



Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

What’s that axiom? ‘Hell hath no fury like a snowman scorned’? Something like that, anyway.

Greart analogy, makes one think about making a snowman. Especially if he has a broom in hand. Not, to mention Hocus Pocus either, sly rabbit, hiding under Frosty's hat. He is an evil rabbit.


Thank you for sharing this twist to an old childhood favorite. I will never see Frosty as a sweet gentle soul anymore. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful rest of the weekend.


Keep Writing on!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Dave, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Reviewer's Review Winter Raid and Anniversary Review this weekend. I want to say congratulations to another year here at WdC. May you have many joyful and productive years to come.

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Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "The Curse of February" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move effortlessly throughout this piece. Making it such a delight to read.



Imagery & Emotions:


You created the vision of being surrounded by snow that a winters storm left upon us last night. Adding the picture was a perfect plus to dramatize your piece. Beautifully done.



Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

cars trapped in ice
by winter's vise,

This actually happened to my car the first winter that we moved to Mississippi in the winter ice storm of 1994. It was devastating to the south that year.


Thank you for sharing this unique version of a winter storm and the hopes for spring. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful Anniversary this month and a joyful weekend.


Keep Writing on!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Hello Rhoswen, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Reviewer's Review Winter Raid and Anniversary Review this weekend. I want to say congratulations to another year here at WdC. May you have many joyful and productive years to come.

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Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "Winter's Dance" really caught my attention.



Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move effortlessly throughout this piece. Making it such a delight to read.




Imagery & Emotions:


I love every stanza, they bring new light to the picture you have painted for your readers. It brings back very fond memories of winters past. One's I truly cherish. A marvelous job of telling us this story.



Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Flakes of silver drift downward,
glittering in the light of a harvest moon
as they filter through the darkened forest.


I can picture your opening lines just as if I was lying there watching it through my window. I love watching it snow it is a blissful feeling and wonderous to think such a beautiful thing was created for our delight.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful way of looking at snowflakes. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful Anniversary this month and a joyful weekend.


Keep Writing on!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Hello Angus, I thought I'd drop by and give you a SuperPower Reviewer's Review Winter Raid this weekend.

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.


Title:


Your title "Joey Versus Santa" really caught my attention.



Character, Plot & Flow:


Wow, I would've never dreamed up this plot, your characters are phenomenal as always. Your story flowed throughout the piece, captivating this reader, waiting to see just exactly where this was going.




Imagery & Emotions:


OMgoodness, I found myself sitting on the steps watching the plot unfold as Joey slept and being wakened by Santa with a Glock in his hand. I could just imagine Joey's face when he first woke up. That sleepy-eyed boy was in for a surprise. Now, everyone knows you can't pull the wool over Santa's eyes and get away with it. And to envision the reindeer on the roof playing games and Dancer needing to take a leak ...*Rolling* I can relate to that *Blush*. I found myself wrapped up into your story I hadn't really realized that Santa got the better end of Joey *Rolling* *Rolling* and that Joey was an elf? That was a twist that I didn't see coming. Durn, I was blindsided by an ELF.




Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Dancer: " I don't know, but I wish he'd hurry up. I really need to take a leak!"

Ok, I have to admit that this was my all-time favorite line. Only because I can relate to it, oh too well.

Here are the suggested changes: Mind you they are only suggestions and I hope that they are helpful and useful. I do use Grammarly for my editing, I find it easy to use. I'm just going to email you the other half of the edits. Most commas very few spelling errors. It makes this review over 4485+ characters. I hope you don't mind the second pair of eyes. I actually have 4 at the moment and I'm having issues.

#1: Or when he killed that dumb little girl Jenny down the block and then dragged her lifeless body down to the river because she'd called him a 'Butt-Head'?
#2: But calling him a 'Butt-Head' in front of his friends was more than he could take.
#3: Well, there was only one real way to find out; tonight he would wait up for Santa and confront him on the spot omit comma, because he was going to get his presents one way or the other.
#4: Joey reached under his pillow and gripped the handle of the 16-inch carving knife he'd snuck out of his mother's kitchen earlier that night.
#5: He figured one good swipe at the red-suited guy's throat would do it, and then he would take his sack and run away, having more than enough toys than he could play within his entire lifetime.


Thank you for sharing this Santa tale of sorts. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your piece. The last time I was in your port I read "From A Christmas Tree's Point Of View" I enjoyed reading it as well. It was my pleasure and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.


Keep Writing on!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:
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Title:


Your title "A Saviour which is Christ the Lord!" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout your piece, pleasing your readers.


Imagery & Emotions:


You picked a favorite verse for your piece. The birth and death of Christ overwhelms me when I read Luke. I feel so close to Him. I picture it all as I read your piece. Great job, in expressing each stanza. I can tell that it flowed from within. I found no grammar errors and it is very easy to follow.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

which is Christ the Lord.
Jesus Christ is Lord!

The Greatest gift is our Lord Jesus. Without Him, we would not have life.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible. It is my honor to Congratulate you as the November WINNER.


"1st Place WINNER"

May you be blessed always,
Keep Writing on!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "John" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


Your rhythm and flow move throughout your piece. Making it easy for your readers to follow along.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture, John, surrounded by the crowd speaking about our Savior that is coming. What a glorious thing to be able to witness and hear him speak. To hope for such a person to come and save them, us. If they only knew what we know today. And we can only comprehend bits. Now, if only, man will listen to the word of God, they can be saved? Excellent job, I found one error, you forgot to add the prompt to the bottom of your page. I would like to discuss it more in detail with you separate from the review.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Preaching to man about the King
He is calling out to all.


Talking to others about Our Heavenly Father, Abba, Friend, All Mighty is the greatest joy one can have. Letting them know that He is there for them as well. I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


May you be blessed always,
Keep Writing on!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "For Such a Time as This" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


I find your rhythm and flow moving throughout your piece. Making it easy for your readers to follow.


Imagery & Emotions:


It takes great strength to stand before someone of authority and to speak to them, sometimes. It's like giving a speech of sorts in a way. And we are to fear our Heavenly Father because He is the greatest Authority. You must have had to give a speech or two at work. I remember once having to, I was scared to death. You did an excellent job, I found 2 errors, easy fixes.

#1: And would betray me, (move your comma back one space)
#2: Your golden scepter bids me come,


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

For in such a time as this:
My heart pounds in my ears,
And would betray me ,
If God did not give me courage.

Sometimes even when we speak to others we need that encouragement that only God can give us. I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.



May you be blessed always,
Keep Writing on!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
WELCOME TO THE LIGHTHOUSE POETRY CONTEST


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Dear St. Jude" really caught my attention.

Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow of your piece are throughout your piece. Making this an excellent read for your readers.


Imagery & Emotions:


A letter to St. Jude telling of your repentance and searching for forgiveness. This is short and to the point. Are you Catholic, by chance. I was raised, Baptist, Catholic, and Pentecostal. It was deemed whomever we were staying with, that's where we went. Excellent job, I found 1 spelling error, judgment.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

It's for saintliness I struggle.
I fail so painfully that I fear His judgement.
No secrets are kept from God.

People just don't understand that God sees everything and you can't hide it. It reminds me of a child hiding the cookie wrapper under their pillow...lol. It eventually is found out. I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


May you be blessed always,
Keep Writing on!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contests here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious-based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title " The House on the Rock" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


The rhythm and flow move smoothly throughout your piece. Letting your reader's imagination weave into it.


Imagery & Emotions:


I picture a young family growing up in a home that had a strong foundation of religion and love. In many ways, I believe that this is what today is lacking in many homes. I was brought up by my parents and their families, as a community giving us strong values. I like the rhyming that you added to this piece, it makes it unique. Excellent job, I did find 1 grammar error. #1: Mommy and Daddy had a love for each other. Also, you need to space here. Learned that lesson,___ learned it well, He’s in my heart, that’s were he stirs.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Learned that lesson, learned it well, He’s in my heart, that’s were he stirs.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


May you be blessed always,
Keep Writing on!
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