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Your title " More About Me " really caught my attention.




I love to hear about others and how they enjoy life, others and the thing's that make them happy.



Ms. Sherri it truly sounds like we would have gotten along well. Your views about friendship are the same as mine. Honesty is always the best policy. If I can't do a great job at what I'm doing then why am I here. I don't like hurting others, I look at it this way. Put myself in their shoes, what were they thinking when they wrote it? I believe that I see this in your piece here. You leaped out and grabbed my heart, speaking to me honestly and candid.



My favorite line is:

My mottos remain unchanged...follow your heart, reach for the stars, and capture your dreams wherever they may lead you.

So very true one should always follow their heart and reach for their dreams. Spread your wings and fly.

I want to thank you for sharing your lovely work with us. I really enjoyed reading it tonight, I would love to have met you. I have your work to read and get to know what Ms. Sherri was about. I'm sure your writing in Heaven.

Keep Writing on!

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Your title "Shortened Time" really caught my attention.




A story of a young woman trying to make the best of the little time she has left. A plot that makes others think about how they would handle it.



In so many ways it makes you wonder just what you would do if you had so much time left to live and do all the things that you want. What would I do? Probably send time with my family and friends just as she had and things that I love to do. Sharing and making as many memories with them as possible.



My favorite line is:

Placing the frames around each poster board I knew my family and friends would truly enjoy this history of my life. The things that I thought were most important to be remembered.

I am one who believes in picture taking, to hold the memories of the past. Always for future generations. This is a very sad story, I for one would've done the same thing. This piece is very well written and tells her story.

I want to thank you for sharing your piece with us. I really enjoyed reading your story.

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Your title "Lady Jayne" really caught my attention.




What an interesting storyline, I find your character Lady Jayne somewhat mysterious and the young man helping her a bit out of sorts.



I find this piece interesting and just wondering, where you are leading us to? The details that you have given makes the reader want more. Which is exactly what you want to do. Great job reeling me in.



My favorite line is:

"I will be at that bench next week at the same time."
Makes a person wonder just what this little lady wants from him.

I did find one error to speak of, but I'm not sure it may be they way you spell scream. This part here "Ahhh" The scram came from an elderly lady... Maybe it's a typo. Just wanted to let you know. Great story and can't wait to come back and read more.

I want to thank you for sharing your story with us. I really enjoyed reading it today.

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Your title "The Nightmare" really caught my attention.




The mystery of dreams, what do they mean? Great plot and storyline, great detail on introduction to the main two characters.



Your great detail of the characters lead our imaginations to where we are there in the dream also. Living the panic and stress of this very vivid dream. I know that it is hard to shake dreams like this. Well written.



My favorite line is:

She was crying, something I had never seen a ghost do.
Ok, was she dreaming about her sisters killer, was her sister dead?
Now curiosity killed the cat they say. Now I want more, talk about a cliff hanger!

I want to thank you for sharing that small piece of your book with us, enough to want more for sure. I really enjoyed reading it today.

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Your title "Courage and Sunflower Seeds" really caught my attention.




A very cute spin off of Hansel and Gretel. I like that you started out with Miles dueling with his father. Making him very courageous. Sweet Margaret with the addiction to sunflower seeds. I do have to say it's better than bread crumbs.



Your details took me back into time, a time of folklore and magic. The spin with the alien was perfect for this tale. I am a fan of Lord's , King Arthur and Robin Hood. The mid-evil time still fascinates us and I believe will for century's to come.



My favorite line is:

“Margaret, when I go into town with Father, I’m going to buy you the biggest bag of sunflower seeds that I can find.
I believe Miles will keep Margaret a large supply of sunflower seeds. A very cute story and one that I will tell grand children about. I found no grammar errors or typos to speak of. Very nicely written and a joy to read.

I want to thank you for sharing your cute piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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