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Review of Potato Soup  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Rose S,

This was an excellent touching short story. I thought you captured the time and era very well during the wintertime in London. The storyline was very nice, too. I liked the part where the pub owner and the wife showed her compassion and their concern when she didn't show up for her soup in the end. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Rose,

I liked the first two lines the best. I thought it set the tone of the whole poem. I did not quite understand the analogy, why you used prison. Sounded like the truth you found out were so painful that you almost did not want to know.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Fey Fox,

This was such a funny madlib.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Astrid,

This was highly erotic poetry. It was great and I liked it very much. It sounded pretty kinky and the subject sounded like a submissive lover. You have successfully made a short exciting poem and it said a lot. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: XGC | (5.0)
Hello Cass,

This was a very good erotic article. I liked it and enjoyed it very much. I would make a good adult movie scene. I thought the well described sexual encounter gave it a exciting image. Good writing and keep it up. *Smile*

Sincerely,
Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello Lifes Breath,

This is a good poem about a younger person contemplating suicide. I guess it happens a lot. If someone says they are thinking about it usually they don't in highschool. But after that, you should take that more seriously.

Either way they do need help. Some high schoolers will take a dare so be careful what you say to some kids. I think there is no need to put you were on drugs because most you will lose readers and reviewers.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of He is  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Candypoet,

This is a pretty good poem. The honesty and the imagery was unique and interesting. I liked the humor in describing hin as a bag of lays and can't just have him just once. If you would of broken it up with the exact same words, I think it would of been a better read. Some typos but still good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of A Day Too Long  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Cynaemon,

I thought this was a good poem. I liked the imagery and the realism that is dexcribed by your words. Is Tiger, the name of the pet cat? One thing I thought thatyoou did not need it the second line. I AM TOO TIRED TO WRITE TONIGHT seems to contradict what you did. You ended up writing this poem.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Railroad  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Sarahboo,

I liked most of your poem. I thought the flow of it could of been better and maybe you should break it up in a stanza form so it more inviting to the readers. I liked the beginning and the middle section espeicially.
Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of If I...  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Avriel. N. M.

I really thought this was a very good poem. I liked the overall flow of your words in this piece and I liked how you started off by using if I told you twice and followed by someone twice. But if it was me, I wouldn't of used that line twice. I works fine if you just kept the first ones but not the latter two. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: XGC | (4.5)
Hello Jewel,

I was impressed with this erotica writing. I figured it will be more graphic but yours was tastefully done and very exciting. I thought it captured a point of view unfamiliar to some men. Some of the things in there were really provacative. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sasktoonie,

This was a very well thought out poem and very interesting visually, too. The poem is really short, the words were limited... but it was so unique and entertaining that I did not mind at all. I rather liked it.
Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Profanity  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Horsetrainer,

Nice to see a man with integrity and honesty. Your poetry was very cultural in an American way. In Japan they don't have any swear word like the ones we have. Because of us, now the Japanese are learning profanities. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of 3:52 AM  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Tamara K. Stevens,

This poem was very nicley written. It contained all kinds of emotions and imagery. I thought it sounded like you dumped your love interest and were feeling quilty about it. I may be wrong but I still liked your poetry. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Flash 54,

Very touching and romantic piece of work. I guess love is either happy or sad when it comes to most of the romantic writing. I liked this lonely and kind of a sad poetry because it almost says the main character knows already that the kiss will never come but not willing to admit it. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn

p.s. It almost sounded like the main character was in love with someone that is married or something like that.
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Review of Out Loud  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Elisa, the Future-Seeking Stik,

This was an excellent poll. I put yes, reading poetry aloud helps me edit and review poems. It is the best way to hear the flow of the poetry. Good writing and I liked it and enjoyed it very much.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Eagles  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Eagles 40,

I thought your poem was nicely written. I liked the glorious imagery of the eagle in the beginning and the nature in the middle. I liked it very much and the ending was nice, too. Good writing and keep it up.

Sincerely,
Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: XGC | (4.5)
Hello Wyldefire,

This was a very nicely written erotica without being very graphic. I liked the romantic imagery created by your words and I enjoyed it. Everything was tastefully done and certainly a good read. Good writing.

Sincerely,
Hidley Boxn
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Review of JACOB'S LADDER  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Poppa,

At first, I was kind of disturbed about the title you've used, but as I read it I guess it made sense. But I still think Jacob's Ladder is not a good title for this poem because genre is totally opposite in some respect. I liked your poetry writing and the overall flow of it.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Porcelain,

I liked your essay very much. Very informative and the subject matter is something of a great interest to me. I think the right brain, the creative side invents things and suggests it to the left brain and it makes things confusing. Throughout history, human being always looked for exterior guidance.

Funny thing about the T.V. evangelist and the homeless that preaches the same thing from the Bible. If a well known evangelist said it, they'll be respected but when a homeless guy is shouting the same thing on the street, he will be considered insane. They both hear voices from God, don't they?

Good writng and read.

Aloha,
Hidley Boxn

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Review of #3 Ill-fated love  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Jake and Boo's Mom,

This was a very interesting honest sounding piece and I think I understood it fairly well. Sometimes it is difficult to open up because they don't think like you do. I liked your poetry and good writing.

Sincerely,
Hidley Boxn

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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Flash 54,

I thought your poem was very well written because you succeeded in capturing your thoughts and anxiety regarding how to relate to the ones you have feelings for. I could relate to what you have written. I sure isn't easy to express love to someone you care for sometimes.
Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Unknown Writer,

This was a very nice honest sounding poem about losing someone irreplaceable. I truly know how that feels. I lost my best friend from heart attack at age 25 few years back. It is sadder when someone at that age goes. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Between us  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello River,

I thought this poem was very honest and it really touched me because love sometimes is one-sided or the magnitude of it is different in each couples. Sometime the woman loves the man more and vice versa and it is constantly changin in a relationship. Good writing for being able to capture the frustration and the lonliness of not being heard by the one you love.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Deus Ex Krakena,

This was a very interesting piece of history. I always knew we used other weaponry against the people of Vietnam. If Phoenix is cancelled, then is Phoenix II something compeletely different from the original?

I heard it's a earthquake maker. Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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