I liked the first two lines the best. I thought it set the tone of the whole poem. I did not quite understand the analogy, why you used prison. Sounded like the truth you found out were so painful that you almost did not want to know.
This was highly erotic poetry. It was great and I liked it very much. It sounded pretty kinky and the subject sounded like a submissive lover. You have successfully made a short exciting poem and it said a lot. Good writing.
This is a pretty good poem. The honesty and the imagery was unique and interesting. I liked the humor in describing hin as a bag of lays and can't just have him just once. If you would of broken it up with the exact same words, I think it would of been a better read. Some typos but still good writing.
I thought this was a good poem. I liked the imagery and the realism that is dexcribed by your words. Is Tiger, the name of the pet cat? One thing I thought thatyoou did not need it the second line. I AM TOO TIRED TO WRITE TONIGHT seems to contradict what you did. You ended up writing this poem.
I liked most of your poem. I thought the flow of it could of been better and maybe you should break it up in a stanza form so it more inviting to the readers. I liked the beginning and the middle section espeicially.
Good writing.
I really thought this was a very good poem. I liked the overall flow of your words in this piece and I liked how you started off by using if I told you twice and followed by someone twice. But if it was me, I wouldn't of used that line twice. I works fine if you just kept the first ones but not the latter two. Good writing.
This was a very well thought out poem and very interesting visually, too. The poem is really short, the words were limited... but it was so unique and entertaining that I did not mind at all. I rather liked it.
Good writing.
Nice to see a man with integrity and honesty. Your poetry was very cultural in an American way. In Japan they don't have any swear word like the ones we have. Because of us, now the Japanese are learning profanities. Good writing.
This poem was very nicley written. It contained all kinds of emotions and imagery. I thought it sounded like you dumped your love interest and were feeling quilty about it. I may be wrong but I still liked your poetry. Good writing.
Very touching and romantic piece of work. I guess love is either happy or sad when it comes to most of the romantic writing. I liked this lonely and kind of a sad poetry because it almost says the main character knows already that the kiss will never come but not willing to admit it. Good writing.
Hidley Boxn
p.s. It almost sounded like the main character was in love with someone that is married or something like that.
This was an excellent poll. I put yes, reading poetry aloud helps me edit and review poems. It is the best way to hear the flow of the poetry. Good writing and I liked it and enjoyed it very much.
I thought your poem was nicely written. I liked the glorious imagery of the eagle in the beginning and the nature in the middle. I liked it very much and the ending was nice, too. Good writing and keep it up.
At first, I was kind of disturbed about the title you've used, but as I read it I guess it made sense. But I still think Jacob's Ladder is not a good title for this poem because genre is totally opposite in some respect. I liked your poetry writing and the overall flow of it.
I liked your essay very much. Very informative and the subject matter is something of a great interest to me. I think the right brain, the creative side invents things and suggests it to the left brain and it makes things confusing. Throughout history, human being always looked for exterior guidance.
Funny thing about the T.V. evangelist and the homeless that preaches the same thing from the Bible. If a well known evangelist said it, they'll be respected but when a homeless guy is shouting the same thing on the street, he will be considered insane. They both hear voices from God, don't they?
This was a very interesting honest sounding piece and I think I understood it fairly well. Sometimes it is difficult to open up because they don't think like you do. I liked your poetry and good writing.
I thought your poem was very well written because you succeeded in capturing your thoughts and anxiety regarding how to relate to the ones you have feelings for. I could relate to what you have written. I sure isn't easy to express love to someone you care for sometimes.
Good writing.
This was a very nice honest sounding poem about losing someone irreplaceable. I truly know how that feels. I lost my best friend from heart attack at age 25 few years back. It is sadder when someone at that age goes. Good writing.
This was a very interesting piece of history. I always knew we used other weaponry against the people of Vietnam. If Phoenix is cancelled, then is Phoenix II something compeletely different from the original?
I thought this was a good essay about your stance in The Crucible. I agree with this essay, too. Abigail is the most guilty and evil person in the story. Short essay but this one was well written, I enjoyed it.
I thought your poem was short but very well written. I liked the overall flow of the way you used your words. I liked the beginning and the middle part of the poem especially. Good writing, and keep it going.
This madlib was interesting and very fun to play. I like shorter madlibs better than longer ones so yours are perfect in length. Maybe you can make a Lizzie's Series and make more madlibs in the future? Good writing.
A very nice poem about the imagery of the nature coming through with your words. I thought the overall flow of the poem was good. The rhymes were okay. Good writing and I liked your poetry.
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