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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The country had signs of war everywhere. The ground was red with blood.
Each had a noble cause but they were fighting brother against brother.

Eventually things and feelings healed with good leadership that cared.

You did a really good job with this short time limit for the piece.

Hats off to the author.




Yellow
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Review of Hard to Handle  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She loved him even when is was an a--.
He hurt her and didn't care because she was his money making property.

Sweet talking, he was, filthy minded he was.
He knew she would put up with anything given by him or she would live to regret it.

She catches the cheater in their own home. Once a cheater always a cheater. Right?

Well this time he is a big looser.
He bought her Tiffany jewelry; like that would make everything right.ha

Well, she did her part in this story to create a good and much needed ending.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of As it Ends  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A uplifting piece full of optimism comes our way today.
From the first breath to your last make all the days of your life matter and count for something.
Touch lives, show love, spread positivity as far as it can go. Think of it as the yellow horizon just waiting to take you farther and farther than ever before.

Nothing to stop you.

Dr. Seuss : ‘Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.’,

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a wonderful uplifting piece to help others understand Him and how He loves us.

You said in the beginning you hoped this would reach other people with a message and obviously it has.

We must sew those seeds of faith to those that are drawn in a different direction as you have done here.

Pointing out how much He loves us and the sacrifices He made for us will linger in their hearts forever.

Thank you for this piece and thank you for your unselfish love for mankind.


Yellow
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Review of If...Only  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a subtle yet very important message this evening.

The world/nature does go by a rule book.
Things happen that are beautiful and even unexpected.

For instance flowers only grow in the daylight.
We know that's not true. There are night blooming beauties for our eyes to see.

So don't put nature and life into a category with tight standards.

Who is in charge?
Any time you begin to think you have it all figured out; there will be a surprise just around the bend.
Embrace this blessing called life.
Make the most of it.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Against Cheating  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The title is cheating.
This is a different kind of cheating.
Cheating at the game of life.
Cheating at the game of achieving honorable goals.
Cheating by knocking others out of the way as you climb that ladder of success.
Society is shallow as they praise the winner.
When you die will they remember or will they be glad you are out of the way and making room for the next dishonest scuzzball standing in line to make the climb?

Be honest.
Like what you see in the mirror.
Thank your luck stars that the Good Lord Saw fit to give you a shot. Be thankful and grateful.




Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sometimes love is hard to understand. A person will think to themselves, it shouldn't be this hard or painful.

So much time invested and yet the pieces keep falling apart. The love is getting less and less and the hurt is becoming more and more.

Our character is finally doing some positive self talk.
Understanding that making some decisions must be made for the better of all concerned.
She decided to let things go and move on. She now realizes that was the best thing she could have done.

Thank you for sharing. Hoping this will help others in the complex WHICH-WAY-DO-I-GO? situation.




Yellow
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Review of STORM WARNING  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us that there will be storms of life and we must accept that fact.
We can watch them come and go but we must remember God is in charge.

Do not fear for God is there.
He is in control of our lives and those around us.

No matter the wind, the dark water, the hard rain, the absence of birds; his arms will comfort us.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of I Hope You Knew  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


When we love someone we have to tell them sometimes. Actions do speak louder than words. What if you are separated for a short term and words must step up to the plate.

So many days pass.
So many long nights but yet the reassuring words keep you two together.

All I can say is love is the most important thing in a person life so ----SAY IT, SING IT, DREAM IT, WRITE IT, KEEP IT FRESH AND ALIVE IN THEIR HEARTS.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of Miss Henrietta  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.



She was lonely and had been for a long time. She did things to help others as was told in the bible.
Her church visits were regular and always in the same seat.
To offer help to others came as second nature to her.
Finally one day she decided to help a complete stranger from the street.
She prepared him dinner in her pretty home.
She had lovely flowers along the way to her door.
This man was not a nice man and would wait for the opportunity to hurt her.

The tables suddenly became turned.
She had the desire to have him live in an upright stature.
Using a trestle with a circle clamp to hold her latest acquisition in place made things work out just fine.

She secured his presence and he was never ever late for dinner.
Good job with the creepy thing.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man with so much love to give has lost his love. He knows he needs to find the right words to bring her back.

He writes and uses poems to tell of his love for her. He even mails them but gets no response.
Time is passing but yet he continues to pursue his writing and method of trying to melt her cold heart.

It's funny though. Love doesn't just turn of like a light switch.
Some pine for another the rest of their lives.
As in this piece. This man won't give up on love or her.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of On the Sidelines  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Have you ever been waiting for your turn to shine.
In this piece we find our character doing just that.
Thoughts have ruled the day for so long.
Anxiety pushing to the limit.
Knowing it will come as it did in your dream.

Then they call you to the stage of life where you can shine.
Boy did you show them what you were made off and more.
Might even give them something to talk about for months after.
Just one-shot.
Good job.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is good and made me sad. Although it was a long time ago when we lost him to a nutcase, he still touched a lot of lives with his music.

This man wanted peace. What is wrong with that?
One of my most favorite songs of all time is 'IMAGINE'

Just imagine a world where we all lived as one.

Thank you for sharing this and caring to keep his memory alive.




Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Success comes in all different boxes. Which box will you choose to represent your life?

A box of money will give you power but little else.

Choosing the box of ethics that you know aren't really ethical, will help you weasel around what is right.

So you are famous with recognition for all you have done, will they remember your good points when you are gone.

Now, the final box. The box that separates a moral man from a selfish, big headed jerk.

It matters what you do, how you do it, how you help others as to whether the tears will be real at the funeral and your memory will be rich in their hearts.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.

This lady has a cat that pretty well runs the show. Lets consider the cat the queen of the castle.
There is virtually little that pleases this ill tempered----cantankerous feline.
But when all is said and done there comes the evening snuggle time, that makes up for it all.
Lets just say this 18 year old cat has more than 9 lives.

Thanks for sharing the lighthearted piece.



Yellow
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Review of 4th of July  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


That day that night.
We all know what it's for.
Paying tribute to our liberty and freedom.
Excitements fills the air.
Music heard through the trees.
The sky alive with colors that sparkle back in the little childrens eyes.
No matter how old you are those designs in the sky, makes you heart want to fly.

Thank you for sharing.
The font fits well.


Yellow
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Review of Poetry  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


When you think about poetry don't you just love
to bounce around the rhythms and the sing-songy rhymes?

That's what makes poetry so special. Emotions, a myriad of emotions. Those that make you laugh, love and even cry.

The wiggling toes makes me think of little kids reading their first books. When you stop to think about it the books teach them about sound and matching by their very composition.

This is good!! Thank you for sharing.
Oh and the picture is perfect.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


So many young people believe the hype that after school, things are going to fall into place.
Well it really isn't like that.
They begin to find that the illusion of catching that brass ring will be simple. No sweat. No problem.

Life isn't a bed or roses and sometimes it even stinks.
You got to keep going cause you never know what you'll find around the next bend.
Never give up on you or your future.
Put some muscle into your determination. It isn't all the hype in books.
Don't feel your are the only one that might fall on a few bumps in the road. You might even find a fallen someone to help back up and keep going.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a very interesting piece.
I like the way the author introduces himself to our site.
He has the same desires we do. He wants to put his writing out there and have it received.
After so many pieces are presented we know each other over vast miles through our words.
The most amazing thought of all is how we connect and are accepted and find it important to look beyond the surface of the words to the heart of the author.

Thank you for sharing with us.
Thank you also for the encouraging and positive introduction.


Yellow
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Review of Somewhere She  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This reminds me of a country song. The guy just knows that his lady is waiting. He just has to find her. The right one. The one with the warmest eyes. The biggest heart. The welcoming arms.
The sincerity and a love that is built on a strong foundation.
This is sweet and romantic.
Thank you for sharing.
We all need to believe that love still is hanging around out there.




Yellow
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Review of Run and Pray  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man finds himself in a dark place.
There is a gap between what he knew all his life and what has been fed him like a good steak.
Well, the steak is spoiled and is spoiling him.
Because of this change he has forgotten what the good food of the Lord is.
He is being tempted and his throat is burning from the evil words in the liquid he drinks.
He feels he has no control over his mind any longer and is being persuaded to move in the dark direction regardless of what he knows.

He is strong with the Lord's love.
He is hopeful because of the Lords love.
He will run toward his Savior path.
Pray for that freedom he once had is as close as
His open loving arms away.

Thank you for this




Yellow
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Review of The Swings  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She was young and excited about the new carnival coming to town.
All the children could hear the noise and even music from time to time.
Finally the night came of the grand opening.
Lined up waiting to pay her way on that swing ride.
She looked and found the right swing for her.
It was perfect.
The swings begin being carried higher and higher. Round and round. Faster and faster.
Then the unthinkable happens.
She is lost and forever trapped on that swing.

This is good. The picture fits well.
Thank you for sharing.
Good twist.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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Talk about making someone hungry.
The author goes on and on about what would be a special breakfast that no one would turn away from.
I mean I could almost see the butter dripping down the sides of the mountain of pancakes.

Then comes the sad truth.
Nothing is the same when you aren't with the one you love.
Breakfast might have been one of their special times before but now it's just a cup of coffee and a smoke.

Sad isn't it.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of My Whimsy  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Could it be our author is bringing us along a trek to the past.
This place just might be an old place where there were bands and celebration. Perhaps a fairground.
The old balloons being mentioned.
Could there possibly be a merry-go-round with animals to match those cloud animals.

Then the pinwheel keeps spinning a tale of another time and place which still offers a bit of whimsy even now.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Fear  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It's a dark and lonely night and our character is unnerved.
The noise won't stop.
There is a figure in the window becoming larger. Could this be a figment of him imagination of death walking about.
Soon he is certain it is death knocking on his door. Fear is escalating and he knows he will never see the light of day again.
As with Poe's writing; our author brings the fear to notice a bit subtly. Then before you know it the fear is all the reader can think about.
Even to the extent of wishing perhaps the character might find a light in that horrible dark and death stenched room.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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