I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.
Success comes in all different boxes. Which box will you choose to represent your life?
A box of money will give you power but little else.
Choosing the box of ethics that you know aren't really ethical, will help you weasel around what is right.
So you are famous with recognition for all you have done, will they remember your good points when you are gone.
Now, the final box. The box that separates a moral man from a selfish, big headed jerk.
It matters what you do, how you do it, how you help others as to whether the tears will be real at the funeral and your memory will be rich in their hearts.
Thank you for sharing.