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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us that unhappy people aren't happy unless they can spread their negativity around.

To see someone smile, they tend to find some story to take the smile away.

So lets see, you could be sad, unhappy, full of despair and depressed and listen to them ruin your day.

You could take an alternate direction and walk your way in a good frame of mind and love life as it is.

Thank you for sharing and caring.



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Review of Friend  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author shares a tribute to the friends at WDC.

There have been times when some of us have reached out to comfort him.

We offered some needed hope on a cloudy day.

We gave reassurance that things would brighten with the new dawn.

We have shared his tears and smiles. All the while valuing his friendship.

We care because we know he cares and is there for us.

Friends are indeed a blessing.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Broken Dreams  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author shares a vision of the changing seasons.

A single leaf holding on for dear life as those around fall and become part of the circle of life.

The dreams of saying steadfast as if hangs on a limb. The warmth that has sustained it and the gentle rains that nourished it are gone.

As hard as it tries to fight changes; they still come.

One could picture this being about a person.

Moving through the seasons. Enjoying the warmth and dreaming freely.

Then comes the winter of life and it begins to show its vulnerability.

From dust to dust; life of man and the leaf.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Go.  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Look at those that took a small idea and built a dream. They have done a lot of work in science and technology, but there is still more out there.

Looking at the cosmos, knowing we still know so little, is only a small brick in a large bridge to the future.

Take your knowledge and use it well. Find something to help medical research.
Search for ways to harness the suns energy.
Maybe even find the way to create world piece.
Anything is possible if you have the desire to dream.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Last Night  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Last night was a special night for a couple.

They sharing their feelings and made promises. They assured each other of their loyalty and honor.

There were different questions asked last night and answered.
Those particular questions could mean the new dawn will be filled with limitless tomorrow for them.

He asked her and she said yes.
Bonded together for all the rest of the days of their lives.

Thank you for sharing.
Like the font for this.
Love happy endings.



Yellow
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Review of Never Love A Poet  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Couples in love are mentioned throughout the piece. They share magic moments while the moon looks on and knows more than they do.

The moon sings, calls to them, cries for them, and sighs knowing what will happen eventually.

A poet is a wandering soul. The loves he embraces become his muses and as they are used up the poet will move on.

Telling his stories and sharing his art with others.

There have been times when a poet might be compared to a minstrel. Singing his songs to all those who will listen and then move on.

Interesting piece indeed.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Epic Empowerment  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this piece we have a woman who has endured abuse and this night is just another night.

Our author gives her 'courage' a voice.
While her courage had been weak in the past. Tonight will be different.

This happens after a while. The abused person eventually has had enough. They muster up the courage to fight back.

It's either fight or flight. Either way she might secure her freedom and peace.

Being out of the environment of pain is what matters.
Her courage is ready and willing to stand up with her no matter what.

Thank you for sharing
Interesting take.
It takes courage when you are frightened and facing a possible tragic ending.




Yellow
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Review of Choices  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two lovers realize that things have changed. Now comes the time to decide whether to continue or move on. Both have dreams and thoughts of turning away. This choice is going to be hard. Apparently there is no hostility between them; they just know it's time.
Either stand their ground or follow the path of their dreams.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The Magician  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a piece about a wizard that looks out for abused children. As the story goes on it has all the makings of a fantasy. There is a crystal ball and a man who takes the little ones tears away.

Well, as the piece continues reality raises it's ugly head. There is no wizard and no one is going to look after those abused children except me and you.

Don't turn a blind eye to the signs.
Listen to them when they talk.
Watch them when the walk.
Look for marks on their little bodies.
Watch for them to seek isolation from other children.
Don't ignore the cries behind closed doors.
Call someone with authority to step in.
Those little souls shouldn't suffer but should be happy and smile.

Think how much a kind caring heart could mean to a lonely hurt little child.

Thank you for sharing and caring.



Yellow
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Review of Hope Defiant  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Oh my goodness.

What an inspirational and motivational piece for this evening.

So full of how we are faced with difficulty in life but yet hope is always there.Reminding us never to give up but fight harder.

Things might seem blacker than black but just on the horizon is a glimmer of light.

It's like a lighthouse for those lost at sea to become the faithful and remember hope is eternal.

He is the rock and keeper of the hopeful flame.
He is beside us regardless of the darkness.
Look to Him.

Thank you for sharing this piece with others.

The picture speaks volumes; so study it. Find the rock in the middle of the vast sea to be something to hang on to through the storms of life.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a nice lead up to that special day.
He gives a Christmas tree a chance to talk of feeling wanted and needed. Even being part of a family, if only for a short time.

What else can we expect from our travelin man?
He could spend his time doin this and that but instead
thinks of others.
Where will he be this Holiday Season?
Remindin us to laugh and sing and share.

Thank you for sharing and caring.

Like the font color and the little ornaments.

Yellow
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Review of sig from Alfred  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is so pretty.
Certainly holds true to the saying behind every cloud is a silver lining.
In essence the hope is there, even if it might be hidden for a while.

and:
(FROM THE BROADWAY HIT ANNIE)
The sun will come out tomorrow.
You can bet your bottom dollar there will be sun.
The sun'll come out
Tomorrow
So ya gotta hang on
'Til tomorrow
Come what may
Tomorrow! Tomorrow!
I love ya Tomorrow!
You're always
A day
A way!


Thanks for sharing this feel good hopeful picture.
Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Now these two guys should have done a better job of planning.
The box is two small.
The thing they did couldn't be taken back.
They didn't follow directions for the job and one got too carried away. Perhaps he panicked a bit.
Now, they are in a pickle. They have to figure out how to make it fit and dispose of it.

I like the way the dialects bring a good touch to the story.
One yank and one English guy.

Thank you for sharing.
Glad you won the contest with this.




Yellow
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Review of Secret Mission  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


They were working together on a plan. The equipment was securely in their possession.
Going through the contents the lights suddenly went out.
What is the noise, the ground shaking as he put the part of the equipment back in its place.
There is something about to interrupt their assignment.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have two girls messing with a spell book in the middle of a field. One is willing to read the spell and the other has a reason to direct the spell at someone she doesn't like.

They think about it for a while.

Soon the tide changes and they decide to just order a pizza.

Certainly a lot better ending than it could have been. No harm done to anyone. Maybe a bit of indigestion from the pizza. Ha

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is jealous of her sister. Watching her sister get all the attentions from guys is making her envy grow.
Siblings sometimes find they don't get along. There are fights for various reasons.
Our character imagines herself taking her frustrations out on her sister in many ways. Destroying the sisters clothes, pulling her hair, punching her face.

That will get attention from the parents in a very negative way. Grounding for our character, and healing time for the sister.

Imagined retaliation against the sister is all so much wasted emotion.
Perhaps our character should just be herself, accept herself, and work with the things God gave her. She is bound to be pretty in her own way.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Ghost of a chance  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He saw her and made a mad dash to her side. Unfortunately on his way he was flattened by a Ford.
Well, he takes his new status pretty well. His mind still fixated on the women.
Catching up to her; he walks her to her apartment. She locks the door but he can enter anyway.
Everything else got messed up this night; his encounter with this lady won't.
She may be chilled since she is going to be sleeping with a ghost.

Thank you for sharing and bringing a new twist.
Not too fond of the all caps.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author is reaching out to those that read his work. He hopes they understand the gut-wrenching effort he puts into every single word.

Though, he at one time, might have lived with blinders on he wants to help open others eyes.

He knows the consequences of listening to those who care not.
He on the other hand does care.

His words might seem harsh or even stark but they must reach the mark.
They must open others eyes to the games people play.

He wants the blinders to come off and the ears to hear the truth.

So many times the truth is masked by lies and, unfortunately, many follow those lies like sheep to the slaughter.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of 2012  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This piece is about predictions and how they can affect others. In this piece our character just knew the world would end.

Sleep is hard to find but disturbing dreams occur.
Then comes the new dawn. The world is still in tact.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Yancy Please  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is a writer and having a bit of writers block. She is having a heart to heart with her main character. Placing 90 percent of the blame on the character and putting a guilt trip on him as well.
Apparently there are many chapters to be written and the character, himself, needs some more work. Just a good example of how we create and develop.

Not bad for such a short word limit.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of In My Dreams  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we find a dream segment that illustrates changes. The various colors indicate that vast amount of changes are coming soon.

The couple start out wearing white and soon create a magical world of their own. Colors as they want them, where they want them, and so very happy.

They don't care about anyone else in the whole world. This is their world they are creating and that's all that matters.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of I Dare  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Love is funny sometimes. It will sneak up on you and completely invade your every thought.

Here we have a poem of love that simply had to be written by it's author.

The feelings needed to be shared. Taking such a gamble takes courage but most of all the deep desire to capture the persons heart.

What words would do it? Which desires should be expressed? Will the longing come jumping off the page? Then, more than anything, will the serenity be felt? Love isn't a boastful pledge but a gentle reach into her heart.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a young woman being held. She isn't sure why. She meets with what she thinks is a lawyer but she falls.

She can't continue her talk with him to find out anything because the guard comes in assuming the worst of her.

I don't know much about this kind of stuff but nothing was mentioned of a phone call.

She hasn't seen her charges she is being held for.
She is being treated like she is a threat to others.

Frankly, the whole scene seems unjust.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


While on stage, entertaining sick children, our character began to feel things he never felt before.

There she was a bright sight for sore eyes. How could he tell her how he felt?

She felt the same way. Young love is intense and new and hard to talk about.
She goes to a friend, the friend of all friends for our character.

Secrets are exchanged and she takes on the roll willingly and with love.

From then on, our character brought hope and joy to others and his partner of love was right by his side.

This is about love, devotion, compassion and friendship from two hearts the size of a mountains.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of Wild Fire  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What and inspirational and motivational piece.

Full of spit and vinegar, as my grandma would say.

Talk about a piece full of positives.

Each line seems to encourage us and let us know there are benefits to writing those words we might struggle for.

Once we begin and the words begin to turn into magic, if you will, it will be picked up by the reader.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


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