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Review of Once In A .......  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem reminds me of the child's prayer, "Now I lay me down to sleep." but then it goes past that, and I think of a first love. It's really kind of peaceful.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very Halloween! I like it! You used the words in the list very well, and it held my attention. I could see it in my mind.
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Review of WDC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a really great poem about WDC. I love it here too! Glad you joined.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a lovely poem! True friends are priceless!!

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Dianne
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Review of Dismay  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I am glad it won the contest.
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Review of Dear Me  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I just read your Dear Me letter for 2014. Very good important goals. I hope you made them.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you did a very good job on the poem. I love unicorns, and I like this poem. I hope you win whatever contest you enter it in.
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Review of WDC & HALLOWEEN  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very good poem. I don't know how to review poetry because I don't understand all the mechanics of writing poetry. However, I know what I like, and I like this one. Hope you win the contest.

Dianne
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Review of When I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good poem. Glad you won!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very sweet. Ive lost touch with a soldier i once wrote to as a teenager. His bame was Joe.
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Review of Sea Runner  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
These creatures might be of some help in today's world. I like this creature, and I like the way you described them and their abilities.

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Dianne
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Review of The Fire  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am glad he was able to save the dog. Sorry, he did not save himself. Fire is a dangerous thing. My husband and son were both firefighters. Fire is tragic. Glad his father was there to see him home.

I think you wrote a good story, and I enjoyed reading it.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the beginning. Are you going to be giving more info about these characters? Do you have the next chapters ready? I would like to read more of this story.

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Dianne
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Review of I REMEMBER WHEN  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very sweet and touching poem to your Daddy! I loved it. I could feel the love springing from his little girl and the love returned by your Dad.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great! Having a money tree would create quite a problem. You would have to guard it day and night!

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem. We all like to hide sometimes. It takes special people to bring it out in us. I am glad you started writing as I like to read what you write.
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Review of Whose Magic?  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I just cleared the rating I last gave this story. You added more, and it is a good story. I enjoyed it very much. I love magic and magicians. Spacing between paragraphs will make it easier to read. Be sure to check your punctuation. I am bad about that! I use Grammarly to help with editing.

Good luck, and Keep writing,
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love this story. Written very well, I see no need for improvement.

Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good story. I like the 'take me to your leader' part. Though I'm not sure we have one.
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Review of Pure White  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I think you wrote it well.

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Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story. I really enjoyed it and am so glad it ended the way it did!

Glad you won the contest.

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Dianne
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Review of The Gift  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good story. I don't know that I would want that ability. Well written.

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Dianne
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Review of Princess  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a well-written poem. I don't write much poetry, but I do like to read it. If this is real life, I am so sorry. You will be ok.

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Dianne
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Review of Pieces of Me  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I admire those who can write poetry so well. I felt the pain all thru the poem.

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Dianne
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Review of Whose Magic?  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I enjoyed this, but it doesn't feel finished. It needs to be proofread and correct the spelling and spacing errors. I would like to read it completed, sounds like it could be a really good story.

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Dianne
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