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Review of Whose Magic?  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I enjoyed this, but it doesn't feel finished. It needs to be proofread and correct the spelling and spacing errors. I would like to read it completed, sounds like it could be a really good story.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think you wrote this well. I understand the self-doubt, I think it will always be there, but we can't let it be first. We have to believe in ourselves, believe that we are good and our writing is good.

Good luck, and keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good poem, but don't trust the devil. He lies.
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Review of Higher Ground  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
What a good story! I enjoyed it. So glad Beth decided to help Jaylynn and Lucy. Good thing the driver stopped to help her.
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Review of Captive Audience  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a great poem! I hope you win.

Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh, I loved this story! I am going to try my hand at it too. Not sure what yet, though.

Good Luck,
Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story. I am going to try but have not yet. I think you wrote it well, and I like him finally getting the point.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Drake,

Glad you decided to join us. I've been here for some time, and I really like it.
You will get out of it what you decide to invest in it. Wish you well and good luck.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Mabel And The Mob  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this story. I'm glad Mable won.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Memoirs  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story. I never thought about writing from a fish point of view. I think you did a good job with the dialogue too.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Free at Last  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your poem. I used to dream of floating and flying. I loved the feeling.

Keep writing
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Review of My Father  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A sweet memory of your father. Kindness is so eady to do and so under rated. Be kind.
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Review of Hourglass sands  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good poem. Sometimes i feel like that. Getting oldisnt for bn the faint hearted! lol
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Review of SKINNY DIPPIN'  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story! I think you wrote it well. I would like to read more of your childhood memories.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this story!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good story! It is a bit sad but vampire or human the end is coming and it will be fiery.
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Review of HE Was There  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem and so true.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of The Baseball Cap  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a funny poem and I did enjoy reading it. The ending made me laugh. I did find it a little violent but I think its a good poem.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I think it was well written and I can't see any corrections needed.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Spacewalk  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I am sorry he died but that does happen in space. I always wanted to go into space, but I am too old now.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a very good story and makes me miss my sister more than I usually do! She lives in another small town and we don't get to see each other that much!
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Review of Evermore  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I liked this story. What good is immortality if you keep dying a very painful death over and over! Does he ever get out of that room?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem so much. It reminds me of my son when he was little. He only bit someone once - his uncle (Dad's brother). He was active but a good child.
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Review of Ever-so  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story! I think I would like talking dogs. My little Sweety almost can.
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Review of Magic Pie  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story! I love the girls and how they are learning. I like Sara's parents firm but gentle and loving. More stories about the girls would be fun to read.
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