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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Why I chose this piece Part of the Newbie newsletter. Welcome to WDC

Overall impression of piece: I have never been to Sturgis. I could use a better geography lesson. I have heard lots of stories from Christian rider groups

Grammatical and spelling errors With a semicolon, the second part of the sentence doesn't need a capital.

What I liked?*Smile* Although I am not a biker, I know some and kind of get this. We all want to be part of some phenomenon, but the reality is that there is nothing quite so pervasive to capture us

What I disliked*Idea* Block format with a line in between paragraphs is wrong and hard to read on the screen. You have a lot of jargon that not everyone would get--like FLH. With any profanity, this should be rated a bit higher. It is not offensive to me but to others.

How the piece made me feel: It is kind of like going to hippie things. They act like they never grew up, but they aren't really real. The question isn't whether they have feelings. The question is whether they are real

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Review of Way Back When  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Why I chose this piece Part of the Newbie newsletter.

Overall impression of piece This did bring back some memories. My grandkids used to look at my LP's and think they were very large CD's. I had a lot of 45's

Grammatical and spelling errors: Poetry rules of grammar are pretty much non-existent. I get that. However, since this is meant to be read, I could use a few more commas.

What I liked?*Smile* You have odd capitals showing up at unexpected places. At first, it bothered me, then I decided I liked the emphasis. There is a feeling of nostalgia and some regret. The imagery is easy to see and quite unforgettable. You have interesting rhyme that keeps popping up and making things interesting

What I disliked*Idea* Feather in the wind is approaching cliche.

How the piece made me feel This is a very nice piece. It achieved its purpose with images that brought back my own memories.

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MichaelFrom Mountains
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece I have a piece about raising Whooping Cranes. Your came up as associated with it. I love ecology. I have a pretty big section on my Port.

Overall impression of piece The plight of the Lion is pretty well represented. He is the King of Beasts, but they have been affected for not being able to pay our rent.

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems ok

What I liked?*Smile* Every fact in here is extremely well known and documented. The ones who are saving animals almost have to be militant about it. This is a very readable form

What I disliked*Idea* I am not sure how much this gains in a poetry format. Rhymes are not that strong. This is more telling than it is showing.

How the piece made me feel This is not really so much a feeling piece. It has a lot of facts in here. I am not sure you can control feelings. Facts are probably the only way towards understand.

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MichaelFrom Mountains
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Why I chose this piece Part of the power raid

Overall impression of piece: Why not a cow? It seems a bit over the top to write about

Grammatical and spelling errors God should be capitalized in both places (I think). Probably Mother Nature also

What I liked?*Smile* I love knowing where this comes from. I am sure that Shakespeare never wrote on cows, but maybe he should have. It is pretty well crafted in rhythm and rhyme. Couplet at the end is very good.

What I disliked*Idea* Pretty good except the grammar part.

How the piece made me feel I smiled as I read this. We in North America think milk comes from the store. At some level, we know, but it seems inconvenient.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece I saw this in the writer's newsletter.

Overall impression of piece I am only an animal person by association with another animal person. Then you have this intriguing question. Why does this annoying thing like me?

Grammatical and spelling errors Cross between isn't a complete sentence. I would append it to something else.

What I liked?*Smile* I don't naturally have this same affinity as you, but I do get it, for some reason. An ugly gorgeous puppy is something I get. I probably have one too.

What I disliked*Idea* Cocker Spaniel-Jip mix. I have no idea. No idea. This is heavy on your reflections. I don't necessarily see much relating to the reader.

How the piece made me feel There is a spiritual connecting here. Until I and the dog at my house bonded a little. I would not thought it possible.

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Review of Story  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece I like stories and bookmarked this

Overall impression of piece Definitely a beware of what you ask for story. You might get it.

Grammatical and spelling errors No errors

What I liked?*Smile* This is definitely a logical progression in the story line and plays with the reality of our humaness

What I disliked*Idea* This looks like it came from somewhere. I am not sure if I have heard it before. I would identify where the Gods are a part of.

How the piece made me feel I like my nose. I am not sure I would change anything.

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Review of Pennsylvania  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece I was looking through prose and found this. Home is a very evocative place

Overall impression of piece: We never have clear thoughts and ideas on home. This pretty much describes that in an image filled way

Grammatical and spelling errors: Grammar is different in prose. Poetry is more the emphasis

What I liked?*Smile* This is very personal. I have lived in Idaho for 25 years and it has become home. I could do better economically elsewhere, but there is much more going on.

What I disliked*Idea* It was lying on my tummy sentence is too rambly (run-on sentence) and really doesn't add anything or set the scene

How the piece made me feel You are part of America's children. Roots are important, but we are not sure why

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MichaelFrom Mountains
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Why I chose this piece I like writing non-fiction

Overall impression of piece This is extremely helpful. There is a relative dearth of this on the site.

Grammatical and spelling errors: No errors

What I liked?*Smile* You gave a place to write and obviously have a lot of experience in this area. I really like thinking while I write, and again, this seems in a minority. A lot of the stories seem so unrealistic that they might as well be fiction. I like that you have examples

What I disliked*Idea* Can't see any issues

How the piece made me feel I have a lot of this on my site. I will be reading more of yours.

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Review of Memories of Fall  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece This is an anniversary review. I am unfamiliar with your work so it is a treat for me

Overall impression of piece: There is a lot of heart in this piece. It is in your nonfiction portion but listed as fiction. Interesting

Grammatical and spelling errors: No errors noted.

What I liked?*Smile* These appear to be conversations that perhaps you had before. It is the types of conversations that couples have when they have lived together for many years. I have been married 43 years. They definitely have shared history with the deer who turned into a skink

What I disliked*Idea* I am not exactly sure what is going on here. There appears to be an ethereal nature to this. If this is otherworldly, I need more hints. Otherwise, I need more of an idea why this is written. It is beautiful. Perhaps, that is enough. I am not sure if they would have talked like this. I think they both would know when hunting season was. Maybe it would work a bit better from Wilma's point of view as she would probably be more introspective.

How the piece made me feel: This is a labor of love. I can feel it. Thanks for sharing it.

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Review of Last Flight  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece Part of the anniversary raid. Happy Anniversary

Overall impression of piece: There has to be magic in dragons. There is kind of a mystical aire to this

Grammatical and spelling errors Reads well. No errors

What I liked?*Smile* You have created a mystical and magical time of dragons. You have pretty well-constructed rhyme and rhythm
What I disliked*Idea* It is often helpful to talk about the format you are using, I assume you did well in this pretty tightly constructed poem.

How the piece made me feel: Maybe just a little too metaphysical for me. Of course, I wasn't there and you weren't either; I have seen lots of dragon movies. I am not sure if I get a clear picture

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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
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Why I chose this piece I saw this attached to an article I was reviewing

Overall impression of piece: This is a very well known list commented on many times. It is still pertinent today

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems ok

What I liked?*Smile*Definitely a topic for our times. I grew up in an era where Dad's were breadwinners and little else. There have been changes although probably not enough

What I disliked*Idea* Existential problems is a bit over the top as the water will be eventually. We are drowning in this country. I would like to see less of the list or append it with a footnote. Your interpretation of what is going onis much more important

How the piece made me feel Sailors must take advantage of water or everyone drowns. Financial is the least likely way to drown in this country

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Review of internet  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Why I chose this piece I like essays. I review and write them. Welcome to WDC

Overall impression of piece This is kind of a thumbnail scketch of the Internet. Now, it is not just the computer that is the expert. I have people googling their phones in Bible class

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems ok

What I liked?*Smile* All your information is pertinent, if not a little scketchy

What I disliked*Idea* Detail is what really helps. Also, most people know most of this. They have internet at their house. I think what most people want is to know you take on this. We've become a nation of know-it-alls without actually doing most of the work

How the piece made me feel We know very little about you. I assume you are British and perhaps you like soccer. As a reviewer, more information would be of help

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MichaelFrom Mountains
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece Part of the spiritual newsletter. Welcome to WDC

Overall impression of piece: You certainly do have a unique perspective and outlook. Your artwork looks intriguing

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems ok

What I liked?*Smile* Most of the imagery in this one is quite good. Your images have immediacy in that they are powerful and visceral

What I disliked*Idea* I am running a race against time is pushing cliche. I would give more detail and less of a patterned response. Same issue is seen with everything is a blur. The block style of writing should have a line in between paragraphs. On the screen, it is harder to read.

How the piece made me feel I pretty much get this. I can identify with the emotions.

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MichaelFrom Mountains
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Review of Stardust  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Why I chose this piece Looking for a spiritual piece and found this one

Overall impression of piece: I generally do like concise. You listed this as poetry. I definitely see the prose elements.

Grammatical and spelling errors: On short pieces, I like to put these through grammarly. This one comes through with no errors

What I liked?*Smile* You definitely have a poet's eye on things and your science is interesting. Just about everything, including humans, is star dust

What I disliked*Idea* Are we the result of a cosmic process or are we the cause of it? It would go with the first option. Man is something on a spiritual scale--my bias--but we are not very much in terms of the ultimate role of creator. I need a lot more to strengthen your imagery

How the piece made me feel We are an end result but not the instigators

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Review of The Doorway  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Why I chose this piece I was looking up spiritual pieces and found yours.

Overall impression of piece: This is a challenging piece. Love has been defined and redefined. I do think it can change over time as relationships change.

Grammatical and spelling errors: You have one broken quote where the second part should start with a capital

What I liked?*Smile*This is good and vivid prose. It is about one of the greatest mysteries ever thought of by man and woman. What are we about in our relationships and just about everything else. It is the ultimate question

What I disliked*Idea* This is a story about an unnamed man who loved Marie. I know you used first person to give more of a sense of intimacy, but somehow we lose the fact that it is his story

How the piece made me feel Nobody ever has this all figured out. It is covered under covenant under God and His associated blessings. I am not sure if they ever come in a flash of light

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Review of A striving writer  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece This was in a Newbie Newsletter. I was intrigued.

Overall impression of piece: You are right. We all do go through this

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems ok. Reads well

What I liked?*Smile* This piece is not overly rhymed. There is just enough to keep things interesting. I like the repeated lines and the internal rhyme within a line works pretty well too

What I disliked*Idea* It is not all about emotions, at least in my book. There is definitely a mystery here. Just as it takes time to build a person, it takes time to build a writer

How the piece made me feel We should write because it is in our inner being to write. The words sometimes come later. It is like a concerto. Sometimes there is dissonance that has to be resolved.

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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Why I chose this piece I saw this advertised on a side panel.

Overall impression of piece This is interesting. I think most of us know in our heart that this has not gone away

Grammatical and spelling errors: Second to last sentence is a run-on sentence. Simple numbers like one and three need to be spelled out. Victim-blaming

What I liked?*Smile* This seems kind of personal, and believe me, all women are not the same. There are highly intelligent women and some I wouldn't care to cross.

What I disliked*Idea* You throw out a lot of data, but never say where it came from. This looks like a school paper, but the real emphasis is not said.

How the piece made me feel You never say who you are. S can be either. It seems like this is a rant. If you want to change minds, we need data and know where it comes from. Make sure you know what you are trying to do. Rants, in general, are not effective.

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Review of Doing Time  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Why I chose this piece This came up while looking for interesting things to review. Congratulations on your award for this

Overall impression of piece: This is obviously an analogy. I doubt if you have a record, except with the God in Heaven

Grammatical and spelling errors comma between prison and waiting

What I liked?*Smile* Love the summary paragraph about what sin in about. People are really trying to create a pseudopeace. This is clearly an original and unique expression for something everyone knows, but few think about.

What I disliked*Idea*: I would introduce the idea of analogy earlier and show even more graphically what that prison might look like. I do firmly agree with you that we are a slave to sin and we do pay the price for this

How the piece made me feel Life, in the last sentence, is spiritual life. English doesn't even have a word for it. There is even more to this. Look at jn 10:10. He clearly uses that kind of life. "Zoe"

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Why I chose this piece I chose rebirth as a focus to screen articles and found yours

Overall impression of piece: This is a pretty impressive work. You know your stuff pretty well from a science point of view. Most of a baby's brain is pretty much unformed. 65% of their nutrition goes to the brain

Grammatical and spelling errors Reads well. No errors

What I liked?*Smile* You have the format down pretty well. The rhymes tend to build your piece. They are not to obvious or contrived to make them fit. Good rhyming couplet on the end

What I disliked*Idea* I often feel that sonnets are more personal and less descriptive. Your language is a little too matter of fact without the mystery behind sonnets.

How the piece made me feel I kind of see science here and not the ultimate mystery of the universe. We may have a destiny. They used to say, it was written on the stars.

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Review of God's Races  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Why I chose this piece I saw your pieces. I am a Christian, but I review just about anyone else. You do not have to think like I do

Overall impression of piece This is a colorful and creative piece about interesting things

Grammatical and spelling error Just like sentence is not a sentence. I don't know what Sry means. It is in a contraction always has an apostrophe. As christians, should be followed by a comma. I use grammarly to pick up stuff like that. It is a free program

What I liked?*Smile* I like the idea that man came later. mankind is a very late arriver.

What I disliked*Idea* You never really made a point for imps. I need some more objective comments. Your thoughts on demons not being fallen angels really doesn't have a rationale behind it. I just have what you say. I am not sure why you are an expert.

How the piece made me feel You have a lot of thoughts here. Many of them need more developement

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Review of God  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Why I chose this piece I saw this advertised on a side panel. Welcome to WDC

Overall impression of piece: As this is an opinion piece, I have no right to say whether you are right or wrong. I certainly see what you are thinking about.

Grammatical and spelling errors Reads well

What I liked?*Smile* A lot of folks do have this vision of God on one level or another. You can read it this way. Rhyming is pretty well done

What I disliked*Idea* This type of reading is kind of looking at episodes and not the whole picture. I can't say I totally understand God. I don't think anyone does

How the piece made me feel I can not be sure why you wrote this. It doesn't fit anyone's traditions. As a committed Christian, you haven't changed my mind

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Review of Soldiers  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Why I chose this piece

Overall impression of piece This might be an epitaph to many of our fallen who died in far away wars.

Grammatical and spelling errors Reads very well

What I liked?*Smile* These people all remain rather silent, so they do deserve a voice. For a short piece, this is pretty graphic

What I disliked*Idea* Prime of life is borderline cliche. Do their spirits wander or do they whisper things to us to wake us from our slumber. "Freedom"

How the piece made me feel I could see this and feel it. Pretty amazing for such a short piece.

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Review of WOMEN AND MEN  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Why I chose this piece I was looking at a piece on Freedom and your piece was attached to it. The other piece was about discriminating against Muslims. You are correct. We discriminate against 50% of our own kind. Women can be a separate race.

Overall impression of piece This is quite cleverly written. It ties together some rather pertinent thoughts in something that is rather easy to read and somewhat whimsical

Grammatical and spelling errors Seems ok. Reads very well

What I liked?*Smile* You definitely have caught the definite trends in our two halves of our societies. I think the rhyming and tone makes the facts easier to accept and agree to

What I disliked*Idea* I'd like to think we are more than fundamentals and body. They are kind of just the facts and of course, they mean their facts

How the piece made me feel This is almost like a song. Why our philosophical things easier in a song? I think it is because we might not ever have a complete answer anyway

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Why I chose this piece I looked up a couple of spiritual topics of rebirth and freedom. Your piece seemed of interest so I bookmarked it

Overall impression of piece This is definitely a thought-provoking piece. What is normal to our society and to God?

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems ok

What I liked?*Smile* Things certainly have changed in our society. I remember Ed Sullivan and Disney on Sunday nights. Family friendly is not even a consideration in these days. It certainly has degraded since 2002 when you wrote this.

What I disliked*Idea* Never really define normal. I think it is kind of a nebulous term anyway. Society may deem itself normal, by its definition, but be far away from the purposes of God. It kind of seems you go through this wondering and kind of struggling for definition and purpose.

How the piece made me feel With God as Father, I think we are all so different, that He has to treat us differently. That is what Fathers do. They know.

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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Why I chose this piece I looked up pieces on freedom and came across yours. Interesting. It does put a definite different spin on all our wars for independence

Overall impression of piece: This is obviously a rant. I know little to nothing about you from what is in your port.

Grammatical and spelling errors Good. No errors

What I liked?*Smile* You have points and you made them known. You didn't hold back. I like that. I know how you think

What I disliked*Idea* Twenty-five percent of your life means that you die by the age of 84. You have a lot of freedom at age 18. You parents have rights to kick you out after 18. Not having representation and being taxed is kind of moot because most early adolescents don't make enough to be taxed. There is a way of doing these rants. You anticipate the objections and supply arguments to counter them

How the piece made me feel My Dad always had a saying: "Those who are willing to make a decision are generally allowed to make it." I think we are responsible for our decisions well before 18. Most parents want you to be free, as long as you show good judgement.

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