The Title
Awakening Old Memories is sometimes my favorite thing to do. Of course with breakfast being made and coffee dripping- oh yes I would be up and gone.
My First Impression
I really enjoyed these special memories and I loved that you included the table because isn't that the very place we all come together as a family?
I am also glad that you want to write these great moments and I would love help you to convey them in a special manner.
I Would Suggest
What I want to show you are only suggestions, this is your work and yours only.
Most of the issues I see are spacing and punctuation. I will give you an example.
You wrote
This morning I awoke to an old familiar memory
; The aroma of fresh coffee, and bacon frying. Those delicious smells brought back memories of when I was four, and we lived on a farm. The farm wasn't very big; roughly 100 acres, and we had four milk cows, some pigs, and chickens. I shared the upstairs bedroom with my older brother, and every morning Dad would rouse him up at 4:30 to help milk the cows. I was always wakened to my brother's protests, but soon drifted off for about another hour. It was then that Mom got up to start breakfast. In about thirty minutes the wonderful aromas of biscuits, ham, sausage, or bacon and coffee percolating wafted up to me. I would dress and hurry downstairs.
I Suggest
This morning I woke up to an old familiar memory of fresh brewed coffee and bacon frying. Those delicious smells brought back memories of when I was four and we lived on a farm. The farm wasn't very big, roughly 100 acres with four milk cows, some pigs and chickens. My brother and I shared the upstairs bedroom and dad would rustle him up at 4:30 am, the crack of dawn. Of course my brother would protest and disturb my sleep. I would wake up on my own time to the aroma of biscuits, ham, sausage or bacon. The coffee percolating would waft under my nose giving me the signal to wake up!
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