This is prose, well written and such a warmhearted thought. To have the blessing of innocence, childhood, and the comfort of a good night sleep for a child it as if a angel watched them sleep. I can remember my mother telling me so. No errors that I see, and again warms the toes.
I'd change the title.
and use a line for the description. Such as for example:
Nighttime Angels
Their wings carry me off to sleep
Acrostic is a great poetry form I agree for simple well expressed poems that one does want to bog down super complex words usage. I enjoyed your two outlooks into a music keyboard, very creative. Delightfully pleasant and well done. Thank you for sharing and have a great day.
Enjoyable poem, about I'm sure many of us more so as we age .I do really see any musical elements to it, but that could be bad. There's some reuse that add to the emphasized feelings of loving till dying. I enjoyed it, and hope you have a good one.
I found this powerful poem on "what to review" page and am truly delighted. I see no errors, love the subject matter, and such a creative idea. The rhyme just the idea of such happening is crazy, although I know its true. Thanks for sharing and enjoy your day.
What a creative poem, and not what I was expecting at all, bought me back memories of school and the teachers hitting me with rulers if I used my fingers to count in Math. Childhood object kind of makes it sad. Very good use of imagery, small and to the point.
Thank you for sharing.
Kudos! DoXx, The Renegade Monkey I saw your post in the newsfeed's and Welcome Back.
This is powerful and well written, keeping to structure and a rhyme which is not easy when so much feeling is expressed, so much pain. I heard once that grief is as powerful as you loved, in that is never the same for anyone. I enjoyed the imagery and could relate to some, the shadows, tear streaked windows. Some of my own memories were stirred up. I see no errors and again this is great. Its healing to share as difficult as that is.
Hello, Anni Pon Classic pirate troupe, entertaining, and a great low reading so may more will enjoy this quaint, descriptive story in a poetry form about mutiny. I enjoyed and Thank you for sharing and stepping into the dark.
Good Morning Solum Anderson I found this on the Recent Reviews page, and despite the very very small font, I can't agree more. So stupid thoughts I believe no one has such. Being alone is a feeling, more than a word, and with more mental health awareness every year, I'm sure we'll grow and understand it more as it affects each and every one of us. It's not to mistake it for others similar feelings like sadness and passive behavior. Like I've said I enjoyed this, you too hard on yourself in the description. I only suggest larger for those with no eye sight like me.
Nice touch in this poem the rhyme scheme. Simple two line coupling but effective. At first I imagined a cat, as they would see such a topic but after reading a few times it felt more human. To gaze at someone who you know will never love you is a powerful experience, not something I have ever had. Thank you for sharing with myself.
Abby Gayle I wish you luck in the contest and honestly think this is great. Simple imagery but inline with what the poem is describing. Relatable, presentation spot on.
Panic not setting in was a nice touch. Thank you for sharing and Write on.
It's a chilly day to give a review and its you, Haha! intuey.
I admit the description made me curious as I usually avoid poems and stories about losing someone but this is powerful but not too emotional. Thank you, and Happy Holidays.
It's a great windy night, to creep out of my darkness and give you jackiesmuse If I had not seen the political, it gave me the feel and imagery to think of a bad relationship like a mephapor. Small, quaint and well written. Must be the elections attacks.
Chilly night, perfect to give Scotty1615 a review.
Butterfly are often said to carry souls, I heard that a lot when my son died. Soul Full Butterfly is almost mystical in the feeling you share about your mom as you see that yellow butterfly. The flow is great and its easy to understand. I thank you for sharing, sometimes it not easy.
Powerful, emotional poem, about a abusive relationship, I understood it well, and enjoyed the quality of it. You do not need a 18 plus rating though, and a lower rating means more people will read what your sharing and perhaps not become those unsaid words that live in every destructive relationship. Somewhat sad, but a message that can't be girdled, no taming. Thanks for sharing` Woot!
Thank you for sharing this somewhat dark brooding poem about betrayal and suffering to move forward.
I enjoyed the imagery, the creepy feel of this beautiful vampire killing and gaining from it, again Thanks! and enjoy your day.
Thank you for sharing with me. A very oversaturated fancy, often misunderstood word usage, I went very slow .Well written and good feelings in this, feeling of country and laws and being proud, even a speck of kings and how they'd rule in storybooks.
It's always nice to come across a well written "E" rated poem. The imagery is quaint and it flows nicely with no tense changes that I've noticed. My only suggestion is you have some spelling errors in both the poem and the description.
Superb! I don't often read anything besides poetry. This is a great subject. often overlooked, and written with no tone or subjective options. Thank you so much! I enjoyed this a lot.
Mild erotica this length poem borders, which I'm sure your aware. I enjoyed it, a little vague in imagery but written well with some good word usage. The title doesn't fit with what your expressing in this poem, and I believe you wanted to share the "feel" of that other you love. Grapes will be looked at in anew light.
The rhyming is spot on but seemed forced, teeth like white sheep was a stretch for me, despite the change in the setting, and description and the body parts were great.
Like I said at the the first borders 18 plus.
Perfume can tell a lot for both genders, some wear too much and it becomes a taste experience not scent. This is a great poem, you bring the reader it, lead a little and then smack! That's quite the last line.
This is quite the prose. I reread it a few and am still unsure how to proceed.
I understand why your expressing I think, the power of the that companionship when you have that one person, your soul mate. Powerful feelings and imagery, almost religious in a way.
I'm not sure, the cold day, cold play descriptions, and am unsure the mirror imagery. It's not my intend to not like your prose I do! It's just I unsure of the wordage used. Thank you very much for sharing and Enjoy your day.
I spent awhile on it, and didn't find one word. My only suggestion is to capitalize you words to find. All my time here and never done a crossword, Thanks for pulling me out my dark places.
Gosh this is powerful! Just a powerful smack in the face. You description doesn't give this the credit it deserves, and I think it well angry written.
The only suggestion I have is "toe" is "tow" and I'd capitalize you title. There could be some crazy conversations from poems like this, thanks for sharing.
Thank you for sharing this simple heartfelt expression of aging and moving in with children late in life. Its sweet how we reflect our homes as the nest as we ourselves are momma birds tending to our young.
I enjoyed this small refection and its kind to think of memories new, not my normal theme but thankful you shared.
Powerful outlook on life, kind of reminds me of something Buddha would talk about. Experience changes people yes we choose the reaction but often cannot control the experience. This brought up some emotions for me.
The only suggestions I have and they're only meant to be helpful. You Use "&" often and I'm sure its intentional it should be "and" and the 11th and 12th lines are a different tense and they caught me up, and I'm not sure if they're correct.
Again powerful wordage, people yes, I thank you for sharing.
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