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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop I am here to give you my thoughts on "Listening to the Rain" , which was highlighted for review by Simply Positive.


OVERALL:

A vivid poem about a thunderstorm and all that entails.

WHAT I LIKED:

You did a great job of allowing the reader to use their sense and to 'feel' the thunderstorm. Your imagery was done very well, painting a beautiful picture.

SUGGESTIONS:

I have no suggestions for this poem.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

I found no grammar or spelling mistakes. The poem flows well from line to line.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of A Vile Visitor  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hi Tammy~Catchin Up~ I am here to give you my thoughts on "A Vile Visitor" , which was highlighted for review by Simply Positive.


OVERALL:

A dark poem about a dream that fits the genre well.

WHAT I LIKED:

I've always liked dark poetry, and I think this has a lot of potential. You have all the words right, but, and this is just my opinion, it is missing some of the emotion behind it. I didn't feel the panic or the fear in the words.

SUGGESTIONS:

Just to add a bit of emotions to the poem.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed. The poem flowed will and had a nice rhythm to it.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ~WhoMe???~ I am here to give you my thoughts on "Martin and The Pigeons" , which was highlighted for review by Simply Positive.


OVERALL:

I really enjoyed this poem. Your descriptions were done very well, giving the reader a wonderful picture in their mind.

WHAT I LIKED:

The descriptions and how easily the poem flowed.

SUGGESTIONS:

I have no suggestions for this poem.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

The format was appealing and the rhythm and rhyme scheme of the poem worked well.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Kackie I am here to give you my thoughts on "The Birth of Innocence" .

OVERALL:

I really enjoyed this poem. It has great visuals and the flow is very good.

WHAT I LIKED:

My favorite part of the poem was the descriptions. You gave the reader something to see to match the words. Well done.

SUGGESTIONS:

I have no suggestions for this poem.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

I found no grammar or spelling mistakes. The format is done well and the poem has a nice rhythm.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Dark Frog Angel  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi londa I am here to give you my thoughts on "Dark Frog Angel" .

OVERALL:

A dark twist on the fantasy story the princess and the frog. You did a good job changing it just enough to make it your own.

WHAT I LIKED:

The flow was good and the story kept my attention.

SUGGESTIONS:

I would have liked a little more background on the characters, but for how short it was, it was done well.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

There were only a few things I noticed.

Standing upright, I swaggered out of the schools school's back yard, backyard turning...

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Eyes of the Earth  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Blake I am here to give you my thoughts on "Eyes of the Earth" , which was highlighted for review by Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers.


OVERALL:

The story of a terrible tragedy that befalls a family. You have a nice cliffhanger which leaves the reader wondering about what the messenger says.

WHAT I LIKED:

I have to admit, at first I was put off by the short sentences and the lack of any description, but as I continued to read, it made perfect sense for the story and shows the character nicely.

SUGGESTIONS:

I have no suggestions for this story.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

The only thing I noticed was that the words "other wise" is actually one word. Otherwise.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of my love my beauty  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hi Lauren I am here to give you my thoughts on "my love my beauty" , which was highlighted for review by Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers.


OVERALL:

An emotional poem about loss and how to go one without someone.

WHAT I LIKED:

The longing and raw feeling that comes though every line.

SUGGESTIONS:

I have no suggestions for this poem.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

There were no spelling or grammar mistakes noticed, however, the structure may benefit from a little work. I would suggest evening out the lines, which would help with the flow.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Homelessness  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Hi papaitalia I am here to give you my thoughts on "Homelessness" , which was highlighted for review by Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers.


OVERALL:

Homelessness is a tragedy that most people have seen in one form or another. The homeless are the invisible citizens who are dismissed and disregarded without a second glance.

WHAT I LIKED:

The subject is a very important one and one that needs to be discussed and dealt with.

SUGGESTIONS:

I have no suggestions for this poem.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

I found no grammar or spelling mistakes.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of A Dis-Ash-ter  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Harry I am here to give you my thoughts on "A Dis-Ash-ter" , which was highlighted for review by Simply Positive.


OVERALL:

I love poems about nature and poems that tell a story. This gives the reader both and was done very well.

WHAT I LIKED:

I really liked the descriptions and it was very easy to visualize.

SUGGESTIONS:

I don't considered myself a poet, so take this with a grain of salt, but to me the rhythm seemed to be off in places. The rhyme seemed a little forced in places, which made me stumble while reading it.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/STRUCTURE:

There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed. *Smile*

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Reveille  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi AmokTheClown I am here to give you my thoughts on "Reveille" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

I found this to be a very good mystery with a touch of sci-fi thrown in. The ending fit very well and made it a well-rounded story.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

Only a few things were noticed.

and all its it's causing me to do is spin
The numbers didn't quiet quite add up,

OVERALL

A fun read that I really enjoyed.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Never Alone  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi very thankful I am here to give you my thoughts on "Never Alone" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

I think if most people would remember the message in this poem, there would be fewer lonely people in the world. This poem is very simple, but carries a very important thought.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed.

OVERALL

Very inspirational and true words.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi fyn I am here to give you my thoughts on "Mined, Bodied and Sold (souled...soled)" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

This is a very interesting monologue. You use clever word play to make your points and to described an interesting life.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING
I found no grammar or spelling mistakes.

OVERALL

A well-written piece about adventurous life and adventurous writing.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Switch  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Jeff I am here to give you my thoughts on "Switch" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

The was a quick little story with a nice twist at the end. You used human insecurity alone with not enough information to make Bryce think the worst.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed.

OVERALL

A good piece of flash fiction that kept me interested. Well done.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Humming Bird I am here to give you my thoughts on "Days of pain and Pleasure" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

This is an interesting essay. It reads of one person's sacrifice that, in the end, was well worth it. Sometimes life changes our direction, even for a moment, and things we thought were important, really aren't.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed.

OVERALL

An interesting essay with a great message.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hi nikki I am here to give you my thoughts on "Fragments (prt1 from Bellas perspective)" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers" . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

MY PERSONAL VIEWS

In poetry, punctuation is a personal choice. While some poems can be left with none, some need a little to give the reader a chance to breathe and to take in what has been written. This poem, while filled with longing, really needs some punctuation.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no spelling or grammar mistakes noticed. I would take note of the difference in line lengths as is seems a bit fractured.

OVERALL

A good attempt at an emotional topic.

Thank you for sharing your work and welcome to WDC!

~ Vikki ~
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Review of My Rock Has Gone  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hi Gosha I am here to give you my thoughts on "My Rock Has Gone" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers" . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

MY PERSONAL VIEWS

An emotional poem about the ramifications of loss and how that can be felt deep in our soul.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed. The only thing I would suggest is to be consistent within your lines. with some longer than others, it hinders the flow.

OVERALL

A good poem that, with a little polishing, could have a great impact.

Thank you for sharing your work and welcome to WDC!

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Untitled  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
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Hi jhause13 I am here to give you my thoughts on "Untitled" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers" . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

MY PERSONAL VIEWS

What we have here is just a simple scene of a larger story. It has potential, but given just what is written, it's missing quite a bit. We really need to know more about the characters and have some sort of conflict and resolution stated, even if it's just a beginning, so it can grab the reader's attention.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed.

OVERALL

A start of a story with potential.

Thank you for sharing your work and welcome to WDC!

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Tiny New Star  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi sueBsue I am here to give you my thoughts on "Tiny New Star" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers" . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

MY PERSONAL VIEWS

This is such a very simple, yet true poem. There is so much hiding behind the face we put forth that anything is possible.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

I found no grammar or spelling mistakes, however the lack of consistency in the flow threw me off a bit.

OVERALL

A good poem with a wonderful message of looking deeper.

Thank you for sharing your work and welcome to WDC!

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Last Stand  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Damien Fury I am here to give you my thoughts on "Last Stand" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers" . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

MY PERSONAL VIEWS

I think you did a really good job on this poem. The meaning and emotion come through nicely.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no spelling or grammar mistakes noticed, however, the different lengths of the lines in the second and third verses was quite distracting. Sometimes, the form of the poem is just as important as the content.

OVERALL

A well written poem that, with a little polishing, could be really great. Well done.

Thank you for sharing your work and welcome to WDC!

~ Vikki ~
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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Joy I am here to give you my thoughts on "Deep-Writing or Moral Argument" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

I think you make some very truthful points in this article. The hardest thing for a writing to do is to engage their audience in a way in which a deep emotion is first obtained and then held.

Your article is well written and clear and transitions from one point to the next smoothly.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

I found no grammar or spelling mistakes and your use of quoted material was done correctly.

OVERALL

A very informative article that I think all writers, amateurs as well as veteran should read and take to heart.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of The First Blows  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Hi highhopes I am here to give you my thoughts on "The First Blows" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers" . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

MY PERSONAL VIEWS

This is such a heart-wrenching subject. I really think this could be elaborated on and made into something more; something with more impact. While the details are here, the emotion and description is lacking. You tell the reader what happened in a point-blank kind of way, but the 'story' is not there. I want to know feelings and emotions, and details so that I can feel connected to the characters.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors, however, the format could use a little work. I would suggest taking a look at it and rearranging it some as a few of your lines are cut short.

OVERALL

I think this could be a very powerful piece, it just needs a little work.

Thank you for sharing your work and welcome to WDC!

~ Vikki ~
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Review of Emily's Room  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon I am here to give you my thoughts on "Emily's Room" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

This is a cute children's fantasy story. I think you did a good job of capturing the moment and getting into Emily's mind. I would have liked a little more 'story' but since this was for a contest I assume there was some sort of word limitation.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

I found no grammar or spelling mistakes in this short story.

OVERALL

This is a story that could definitely be expanded if you chose to do so. It has interesting characters and a good beginning.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Daizy May I am here to give you my thoughts on "Music Makes Me Cry!" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

In this piece you have made some wonderful observations. Music touches our soul in many ways. Sometimes it's the tone, or the lyrics, or just the memories of something that happened at the time a song was playing, but music is an emotional experience, no matter what the genre.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

I found no spelling or grammar mistakes here.

OVERALL

An interesting observational piece that a lot of people can relate to.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Harry I am here to give you my thoughts on "Just A Touch Of Spring" , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

I really enjoyed this poem. The changing of the seasons, whether figuratively or literally, is a wonderful subject. I think you captured this feeling well and seeing the world change from barren and gray to green and alive is something I miss since I live in the south and the change is less noticeable.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no spelling or grammar mistakes noticed. The poem had a nice flow and a wonderful feel to it.

OVERALL

A great poem that captures the subject very well.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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Review of A Lost Muse  
Review by ~Vikki~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi super sleuth I am here to give you my thoughts on "A Lost Muse " , which was listed in "Simply Positive Review Forum " . Please remember this is only one person's opinion and the decision to change your work lies with you.

PERSONAL VIEWS

I really like the reflective feel of this poem and I think a lot of writers can get meaning from it. Your words flow very well and the poem has a great rhythm to it.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING

There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed. I found that having each stanza into a sentence worked very well and let the reader think about what has just been written.

OVERALL

A very thought-provoking poem that flowed smoothly. Well done.

Thank you for sharing your work.

~ Vikki ~
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