Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest for I'm no expert reviewer.
Title:
Your title "
More About Me " really caught my attention.
Storyline, plot and characters:
I love to hear about others and how they enjoy life, others and the thing's that make them happy.
Imagery & Emotions:
Ms. Sherri it truly sounds like we would have gotten along well. Your views about friendship are the same as mine. Honesty is always the best policy. If I can't do a great job at what I'm doing then why am I here. I don't like hurting others, I look at it this way. Put myself in their shoes, what were they thinking when they wrote it? I believe that I see this in your piece here. You leaped out and grabbed my heart, speaking to me honestly and candid.
Conclusion:
My favorite line is:
My mottos remain unchanged...follow your heart, reach for the stars, and capture your dreams wherever they may lead you.
So very true one should always follow their heart and reach for their dreams. Spread your wings and fly.
I want to thank you for sharing your lovely work with us. I really enjoyed reading it tonight, I would love to have met you. I have your work to read and get to know what Ms. Sherri was about. I'm sure your writing in Heaven.
Keep Writing on!
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WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"